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Old 01-14-05, 07:48 PM   #1
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Final Vs. Whyte Ave. (LightWeight Championship Match)

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Battles Go Up Friday
Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

20 Lines Minimum
40 Lines Maximum

No Biting
No Recycling
Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit
Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week


Topic: Slipping Away
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Old 01-14-05, 08:00 PM   #2
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check............
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Old 01-16-05, 08:34 PM   #3
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checkity check..
 
Old 01-18-05, 03:14 PM   #4
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no show verse...i hope he noshows i been caught with mad verses to do but whatever if he shows up ill key a real verse quick...

im slippin away
hey hey
lets go swim by the bay
maybay we'll learn to play
with eachother no homo either
and blast pac from 50"" speakers
u dont like me, i dont like u neither
caused by me stealin ya sneakers
pop pop bottle caps rollin on streets
stop stop signs next to cars honkin beep beep
oh shit shit shit im ready to die like big
am i really? nah im jus kiddin kid...
explicit lyrics cause holes in dimensions
and send elton john to the lunchroom...faggot section
i see tension between victims and henchmen
about certain victims gettin more attention
some are neglected ME ME I WANNA GET KILLED FIRST
IM THE ONE WHO PUT THAT VOODOO ON YOU AND MADE YOUR FAMILY CURSED
oh yea thats right i better cut ya head off soon so u could stay...
and u wont be able to run or try to slip away...
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Old 01-18-05, 06:21 PM   #5
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There’s been a stabbing I overhear
Rush to the scene, and it looks severe
I pray that he perseveres, but the situation looks bleak
The formation of blood on the floor makes my eyes weak
Tears begin to form, and stumble down my cheek
I part my lips, my words are drown, unable to speak
I only stare at him, struggling for each and every breath
His glassy glare shows his body heading towards death
Blood seeps through his clothes, and his life starts to drain
Unable to contain the blood flow, and he struggles to remain
As his pain grows, he begins slipping away from life
His night of fun appears to end from the tip of a knife
They pump his stomach in an effort to revive
But the efforts go to waste, as he can’t survive
They zip this man up in a body bag and take him away
But I stay, staring at the puddle of blood in udder dismay
And to this day I continue to pray for his spirit to fly high
And to supply us with his drops of love from the sky
This world has become overrun with unnecessary hate
And more will slip away, and line up at heavens gate
 
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dam...ok ill drop somethin later tonight

peace
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Old 01-18-05, 09:59 PM   #7
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lmao...good luck i hope everyone enjoys this read slapped together in a half hour, i wouldve spent more time on it but i got a lot more writing to do so this is my final verse take it or leave it...

it seems when im doing the right thing it just shatters dreams
a fabric of imagination good thoughts seeping through the seems
a scene brightly gleams into my eyes is it a disguise.......
no...its my wife raped and bloody releasing tears constant cries
i wake up it was just a dream or was it,shes not in bed next to me
i call her hoping to hear her voice but its isolated i start to grief
answering machine i play to hear the kidnappers voice on the speaker
5,000,000 pesos, where to drop is on a paper beside the heater
what the fuck?they got in while i was here? no sounds like a beeper?
nope...just the fact that im an ass a.k.a a heavy sleeper.......
back to the point nomore jokes this is serious time this is a topical
wouldnt want to hurt feelings with the "Emotions most important" obstacle
well fuck that im keying this quick emotions out of the question
if i lose oh fucking well then i bet ive learned a lesson.......
now really to get serious i cried and cried like the bitch that i am
i loved her more then the guy who loved em in "stan".......
anyway to cram this story from short to long not long to short
i decided to hunt the men down after all it was my last resort
got the 5 mil went to the spot in which u dropped the loot
the money for the fools who robbed my bitch and sneakers too
thats a fact saw them in black trucks gave them the cash they went back
i followed them to the hideout but i was loosin them, highway was packed
but i finally got there, a mansion crystal coated light was shining crazy
reflection from the light was eternal <a flip on talibs album now thats crazy
gathered my conscience and proceeded inside wooden double doors
this guy was weird had wood everywhere even walls with boats and oars
i found him...shoved a cricket inside his nostral he ran from me...
guys a bitch get back here so i could make your eyeballs bleed
it was carnage flipped the painting on the wall to hit his scalp
but he continued became stuck so he found another route
but i caught him this time wasnt goin nowhere at all from now on
yelled"GIMME MY BITCH BACK"saw a chess set and hit him wit a pawn
he died automatically then i saw the image stated in the beginnin of this verse
then i woke up again to re-enact the same thing,memories were dispersed

by the way on the reflection eternal part thats a album by talib kweli

peace good luck
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Old 01-18-05, 11:26 PM   #8
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I have to go with final on this one,
I felt him more on this topical he had more imagry better vocab and most of all I felt his emotions on this one but no hate.

I give ya 8/10 homes peace
 
Old 01-19-05, 01:12 AM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by final
lmao...good luck i hope everyone enjoys this read slapped together in a half hour, i wouldve spent more time on it but i got a lot more writing to do so this is my final verse take it or leave it...

it seems when im doing the right thing it just shatters dreams
a fabric of imagination good thoughts seeping through the seems
a scene brightly gleams into my eyes is it a disguise.......
no...its my wife raped and bloody releasing tears constant cries
i wake up it was just a dream or was it,shes not in bed next to me
i call her hoping to hear her voice but its isolated i start to grief
answering machine i play to hear the kidnappers voice on the speaker
5,000,000 pesos, where to drop is on a paper beside the heater
what the fuck?they got in while i was here? no sounds like a beeper?
nope...just the fact that im an ass a.k.a a heavy sleeper.......
back to the point nomore jokes this is serious time this is a topical
wouldnt want to hurt feelings with the "Emotions most important" obstacle
well fuck that im keying this quick emotions out of the question
if i lose oh fucking well then i bet ive learned a lesson.......
now really to get serious i cried and cried like the bitch that i am
i loved her more then the guy who loved em in "stan".......
anyway to cram this story from short to long not long to short
i decided to hunt the men down after all it was my last resort
got the 5 mil went to the spot in which u dropped the loot
the money for the fools who robbed my bitch and sneakers too
thats a fact saw them in black trucks gave them the cash they went back
i followed them to the hideout but i was loosin them, highway was packed
but i finally got there, a mansion crystal coated light was shining crazy
reflection from the light was eternal <a flip on talibs album now thats crazy
gathered my conscience and proceeded inside wooden double doors
this guy was weird had wood everywhere even walls with boats and oars
i found him...shoved a cricket inside his nostral he ran from me...
guys a bitch get back here so i could make your eyeballs bleed
it was carnage flipped the painting on the wall to hit his scalp
but he continued became stuck so he found another route
but i caught him this time wasnt goin nowhere at all from now on
yelled"GIMME MY BITCH BACK"saw a chess set and hit him wit a pawn
he died automatically then i saw the image stated in the beginnin of this verse
then i woke up again to re-enact the same thing,memories were dispersed

by the way on the reflection eternal part thats a album by talib kweli

peace good luck

WtF?? You basiclly cheated whyte? cuz he only posted a weak 20 line verse against you since you posted a verse that even a newb could of beaten, i think flow should redo this because what final did seriously isnt fair
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Old 01-19-05, 02:31 PM   #10
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it was his choice to do 20 lines...its 20 minimum 40 maximum and i dropped 40 why is that a problem? flow should agree with me on this...i wanted to win so i drop 40, i dont understand what you mean by me cheating whyte?...

if your talking about my first verse that was a noshow verse...

and btw 50hater_killer was that a d/r vote homie lol...i didnt have emotion in my verse do some more explaining on the votes flow you could disreguard that vote if you want

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Old 01-19-05, 03:57 PM   #11
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Old 01-19-05, 10:49 PM   #12
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since flow isnt redoing this im sorry i gotta vote final
way stronger peice he did just an all around better verse well see if flow messes with this if not ill write a better explanation..v/final
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I Gots To Wait What Will Flow Do, Then I'll Vote, Wun.
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Old 01-20-05, 02:33 PM   #14
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lol i dont get what everyone is seeing...do u see something different from me?

my first verse was a noshowverse that made no sense because i thought he wasnt going to show, but he showed and dropped...so i dropped a real verse like a half hour later...i dont get whats the problem, your allowed to do that...if i knew he was dropping i wouldve never dropped a noshow verse, i dont get whats the problem...
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Old 01-20-05, 02:50 PM   #15
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Stupid ass motherfuckers... Final posted a NO SHOW VERSE, which he clearly stated... He also CLEARLY stated that if he does show he will drop a REAL verse... Whyte could have seen that, and if he didn't, oh well...

And Dabados, shut the fuck up you stupid fucking bitch.
 
 


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