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11-10-03, 06:58 PM | #1 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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Jay-R - The Mic Life
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1) raps most wanted - youngster in da place 2) fgee - Park Life 3) Handcuffs - fukkaz _________________ "The Mic Life" [VERSE 1] THE PAST! Ever since I was a mere child i've had rhymes compiled Figured out my style and thus learned my words reviled Wantin to be famous had me livin on hopes and wishes So when i'd fall apart it felt like rap was my stiches I was me, that possed a threat to da majority of society They knew i was the only N.B. emcee with such a variety Me and a mic directly connected which was to be expected I was rejected, neglected so it's the life I respected My mind drew out blueprints and released em as a thought They were the buildin blocks of a dream my heart sought I dropped out of school and learned to write a hook The concepts of rap can't be found in a history book Everywhere that i've been I carried a concealed weapon When men got pushy it was a pen I done pulled on them [CHORUS] It's the mic life! The trials and tribulations of a man It's the mic life! When the underdog gets the upperhand It's the mic life! Hard for the normal bein' to understand It's the mic life! That made me the man that I am [VERSE 2] THE PRESENT! Today it's the same way, my struggle's still wit me I pray for better days but my prayer's must be on delay Still waitin for my time to shine wit polished rhymes I can not be defined, can't describe my verse lines My skill is like a pill that will make your body ill My mind is like a water mill that's filled, ready to spill I listen to da world through my head set wit no regret But yet my eyes can't be hid from the preset of life's debt Feels like i'm on vinyl when I get scrathed by needles This aint a metaphore for drugs, i'm pertainin to people And if given the chance to advance i'll do at first glance Anything to enhance my current stance and increase my finance You can't shove me into gear, i'm automatic engineered Isn't it clear? I'm a pioneer to help hip hop persevere [CHORUS] It's the mic life! The trials and tribulations of a man It's the mic life! When the underdog gets the upperhand It's the mic life! Hard for the normal bein' to understand It's the mic life! That made me the man that I am [VERSE 3] THE FUTURE! It was at the age of 10 when it happened, I begun rappin My life's been planned out, I know what's comin and when Maybe some day you'll cop a CD and hear my rhymes play Or you could get the mp3 on yo PC to betray the R.I.A.A. As of now it's my dream that I will one day reign supreme Take over the mainstream and bring true skill to the scene I'm gon add a new twist that not any body could resist Assist the industry persist wit the content my lyrics consist I'm not Pac or Biggie, so why be Jarule and pretend to be? Yo situation's crazy when you get lazy and fall of this early The future awaits us to enter it wit success and dominance Given our freedom to express whatever we think is best Anyone who knows me realizes it's somethin I won't let pass by The guy waitin for the oppurtunity to reach out and touch the sky [CHORUS] It's the mic life! The trials and tribulations of a man It's the mic life! When the underdog gets the upperhand It's the mic life! Hard for the normal bein' to understand It's the mic life! That made me the man that I am It's the mic life! Hard for the normal bein' to understand It's the mic life! That made me the man that I am Last edited by MP~PHASIZ : 11-10-03 at 07:47 PM. |
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11-10-03, 07:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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UPPIN FO' FEEDBACK!
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11-10-03, 08:01 PM | #3 | ||||||
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that shit was hot man, i like the whole three tier concept, past present and future, nice touch. Good flow. I liked the multies.
Good work keep droppin |
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11-10-03, 08:18 PM | #4 | |||||||
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DAMN...KID...HOW OLD R U.....(UR FUTURE SAID 10 IN IT SO JUSS WONDERIN)
BUT W/E UR AGE..THAT SHIT CAME LIKE IT WAS ON FIRE... GREAT WORDPLAY..GREAT VOCAB..GREAT FLOW GREAT CHORUS...NOT MUCH IN THERE I DIDNT LIKE.... BUT LUV'D THE WORDPLAY..CUZ I LUV WORDPLAY...LOL BUT DAMN KID...KEEP THIS SHIT UP..AND U'LL GO FAR SOMEDAY... GOOD JOB PEACE (if pos peep mine....juss was bor'd wen i wrote it)
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11-10-03, 08:43 PM | #5 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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Yo, I'm 16 dogg
Thanks for the feedback |
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11-10-03, 08:57 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Yo. . . I was feelin this piece. Not bad at all. Vocab was good, it flowed and that's the major thing. Wordplay was good, Multi's were great, Flow and Multi's made the piece strong this time round. Try to Up ya Vocab next time and even it out. Have a fair proportion of everything, ya feel me? Hook was ok too, just nothing really to brag about it. Little bland, but the verses made up for it. Keep droppin man.
-Formula. ** Peep Full Circle from me aiight? ** |
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11-10-03, 11:01 PM | #7 | ||||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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11-11-03, 12:32 AM | #8 | ||||||
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i really liked the structure of this post, and the word play. you had this shit as nice as it gets. you can't make this much better.
dope piece man. keep postin' |
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11-11-03, 01:31 AM | #9 | ||||||
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yo nyce drop dawg i liked it Keep That shit commen aiight
Peace (v) |
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11-11-03, 01:56 AM | #10 | |||||||
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^Thanks
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11-11-03, 02:12 AM | #11 | ||||||
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yo like everyone else has said really good drop wordplay was off the hook and flow was pretty much right on sometimes got a little off beat but came right back so maybe a few touchups here and there but overall really good verses and chorus wasn't bad either overall man this was a really tight drop i liked it. sounds kinda like some of my writings sometime we should collab on somethin. hit this up w/ a response to and if u wanna collab pm me or write it in my drop
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90760 |
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11-11-03, 06:59 AM | #12 | ||||||
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nice shit i'll give u an 8 out of 10
can u give me a honest vote here plz cause i aint gettin no feebaack on my battle http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...8748#post898748 |
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11-11-03, 07:25 AM | #13 | ||||||
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IM FUCKIN LOVIN THIS MAN. SUM REAL TIGHT MULTIS N SHIT. FEELIN WHAT U SAYIN.....................................
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11-11-03, 07:25 AM | #14 | |||||
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ILL SHIT HERE!!!!!Enjoyed this piece....everything sharp and on point................8/10 maybe 8.5/10............ILL
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11-11-03, 10:14 AM | #15 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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Good lookin' y'all. Keep the feedback coming!
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