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Old 05-22-06, 09:21 AM   #16
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Old 05-23-06, 04:18 AM   #17
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Old 05-23-06, 11:58 AM   #18
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Old 05-25-06, 04:59 AM   #19
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might as well bump this agaIN
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Old 05-25-06, 05:38 AM   #20
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i like the quiet storm beat its hot.....delivery is aight on the first cat lyrics is cool i cant really judge the quality cuz im listening in lo fi sorry bruh i got dial up lol....from what i hear i can hear clips in his verse....hook needs sum work ad dubs to it or sumthing cuz it sounds real thin feel me dude comes back in same as above....hooks in....mad dog your flow is better than dudes delivery wise u came aight lyrics cool but yea the hook is a killer overall decent drop...yall need to compress the vox and eq em...
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Old 05-26-06, 11:50 AM   #21
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beats ill.

1st verse, lyrics are real as fuck flows on point bit monotone but decent.

Hook, mixins different but it works.

2nd verse, lyrics again on point, flows good decent verse, again monotone.

3rd verse: better energy, flows on..the track needed this verse, made the track good shit.
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Old 05-26-06, 01:25 PM   #22
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aight the intro is coo', who made this beat?

Verse 1: Accent is horrible and boring. Flow is good, quality ain't that good 'cause it goes out and comes back in. Feeling the seesore line. okay verse.

Chrous: Not feeling it.

Verse 2: Same as verse 1 really. Better lyrical content though.

Chrous: Same as above.

Verse 3: Quality is better than errything so far. Flow is good, emotion is felt. Lyrics are good. Work on ya delivery though, most lines are like "dudududududududddduuuu"...good verse though

Chrous: Really not feeling it.

6/10


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Old 05-31-06, 05:37 PM   #23
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aiight nice beat choice...flows pretty good deliverys nice lyrics r good content is on point production on vocals r pretty good..lyrics r good multis r nice..good topic...chorus is pretyy nice all in all good joint work on ya swagga on the mic
Overall: 8/10

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Old 06-06-06, 07:04 AM   #24
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Old 06-19-06, 01:17 PM   #25
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mobb deeo beta always a solid choice....first dude....flow is a bit choppy in spots...delivery is up an down but overall kinda lagging....wow hook was mixed weak....the mix of hook is killing song...k..mad...kinda slured a few words opening...dleivery it better than first dude...flow is choppy in spots too...dubs is overpowering drowning out words....damn this hook would good if u mixed it right but that mix fucks it all up...verses was koo they jus needed sum touching up......1
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