Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004

Topic: Public Service Announcement

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Hi N-Lit..
Checkity Check.

Public Service Announcement..
Your Guest Speaker: SkiddZ

This is My declaration, but my Independance is still Pending
Already the Time to think about Time, For the Offending
Noticeably, your getting weak, The hateful troops, Falling asleep
And Don't you know the Good guys always win..
Inheritence, The land For the Meek..
Speak Up, America is the Land of the Free, Complicate Simple Mind
Look in Your Gold Mind, Dig it out, See what You things You can Find
Because Love don't make the World go round, it makes Your feelings Porous
And if it did, It wouldn't be fast enough for us to Notice..
Im Speaking to You, But it depends on yourself to see if You can get the message
Keep Your head in the sky, We'll escape this purgatory to we've been sentenced
Im making declarations, But I know I'm still always Dependant
Take Your side..Because fact is, Defense will still always be Offended.
I'm speaking to which, Hold Up their beliefs, to the permanent visit to Graveyards..
I'll stick By Mine..
Fuck Hollywood, Because Soon enough, the Sun Sets on their Boulevard...
I'll never sell out, because I can't throw my life out..On Petty Earth Allowance
And I hoped it help, Now I conclude my Public Service Announcement..

Peace.

I Wont Be Able To Make The Deadline...I've Been Swamped With So Much Work Recently Its Beyond A Joke.

If I Could Get A 24h Extension, I Would Be Grateful, But If Not Its Cool, Skiddz Can Have The Win...He Did Make The Deadline.

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N lit
extension given...due wednesday

next time, if you need an extension post in
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thread

^If You didn't give him an extension, I would've left the league, lol.
I can't stand having No Show Wins..

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v/ N litend

I thought you had alot of good concepts...felt emotion....good vocab...it was actually pretty good

Skiddz....wasnt feelin urs u didnt come as prepared....had nothing special too it...ive seen better

skiddz... thought your verse started strongly, with a good smoothe scheme and nice approach to the topic, with well ordered vocab, in the right places, but thought that the scheme got a bit basic towards the middle for a couple of bars... then picked back up and ended it nicely.... all in all i liked the concept and thought it was executed pretty good...
N LitEnd... thought you had the better flow going, but the bad rhyme in the middle spoilt it for me... also your approach to the topic didnt sway me enought to give you the vote... i thought it was a little too short aswell, but still a good read and tight scheme.... but my vote goes=skiddz

Gotta say Skiddz as well...

I think they both had the same message...

Bad government...bad representation of it, bad feelings toward it...

But, I think Skidzz is trying to encourage the depressed troops in his, let em know that Michael Moore and Matrin Sheen suck...
While NLitEnd is only speaking his mind to us.

I thought that added a nice twist to the story.

NLitEnd definately had the structure and format here...good flow off of it.

So, I'm picking story and nice twist over the flow...

Cuz I really think complexity, vocab, meaning, emotion...

Were all even.

I liked the topic and direction Skiddz took his in better.

Good from both though...

Peace

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tough to judge..very close..
I liked N Litend's approach, good flow..nice vocab..
With some emotion to add on a nice little touch..
SkiddZ was just a very strong piece..
Also..same quality in vocab and flow..
It just won me over on how you approached it..
Both had sort of the same concept..
I just liked how skiddz attacked it....
So my v/SkiddZ

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Vote : Skiddz

Both had a pretty nice verse .. Seemed to be on almost the same take of the topic .. Both had well written and thought out verses .. But based on the fact that both were almost alike I have to go with Skiddz because I think he took the topic a little more deeper and juss gave a better overall verse in my opinion .. Nice battle fellas .. Keep writin' .. One