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Battles Go Up Friday
Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

20 Lines Minimum
40 Lines Maximum

No Biting
No Recycling
Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit
Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week


Topic: Violence

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

checkin in for this....good luck to Dabatos...interested in how this will play out

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B.Wall







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Check.. y u put me up against him??? Well good luck

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Dabatos asked for a topic change so its up to bwallakaillness if he would like a different topic or not..

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

yea, change the topic man, cuz i've already done this freaken topic!!

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ok its aight if ya change the topic

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B.Wall







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iight...coo.. change topic now flow!!!

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Ok new topic is

The Blind Eye

You Have Until 11:59 PM eastern time to drop a verse

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

U serious?? lol, iight, i'll do it wen i get home at 7PM western time cuz im at work rite now.. and it will be wut time there?? 11 pm?? that's not fair.. i have an hour! LOL...

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Im guessing I won?? LoL, wow, My verse is so dope! No one could of beaten me wit dat verse *cough* lol

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The Blind Eye

Government takin control having descretion not knowing whos on parol
The system workin for the oppression and not showing nation true goal
Societies lookin right at it but they dont even see
People unprotected sex getting herpes and HIV
White blood cells deminishing dont see needle injectin self sexually feeble
Women gettin prego...i aint talkin dressin they sleepin with too many people
Gun laws dropped Nra holiday...little kids getting heat killin accidental spray
Drive bys constantly running society policy so far away from the gunnin
Drugs are trafficin the streets giving ghetto child a job and somethin to eat
Coke misunderstood by society whether its powder or crak get black easily
Jails lockin dogs up like pound for sellin bones when their sentece shows murder...
Cant convict the guily only the innocent for lack of support and the bias jurror...
Tsunami hit foreign yet we still supply with out look at home front
People loosing jobs due to rich bastards private business donut
Peeps still at war fightin the lost cause ask bush he'll think n pause
Showing progresss not in the win collumn but by how many bodies blew up car bomb...
Iraq people saying gihad holy war strappin selfs with plastic kamikaze blowin kingdom com...
Find ourselfs spraying back like we leak oil only real reason for war was fuel price boil...
Kwait rich in black gold people spillin red needing oil change kids shot with few to brain...
kids in class room get ak teacher says soldier + iraq = kid answers spray
government says we pullin out but pussy too good to go so cummin slow to roll out...
Monopoly call it boardwalk walmart lose local business to low prices then high to start...
Illegal degrees getting posted on the web to learn 3 of um are owned by nuclear heads...
People dont know whats goin on stayin with life just giving you contacts for your blind eye

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limit vs trauma

white ave and acuity

final vs mista_auth3ntic

theres my votes for the other battles..peace

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B.Wall







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DABA gets this one she had a better strucutre her topic scheme was good and she flowed better to help me understand it more.

Tell me why you call these super celeberties so great!!
They so rich, but still nothin to charity they donate..
O wait,They just have to much time for them selves,
To spend all of them wealth, and just time for others they got no space..
How about these ppl in need most, who u never notice..
U look down to like roaches, who's souls are so hopeless..
Thinkin u better all just cuz they all so homeless...
Thinkin u better cuz in life, they never did focus..
They just in need of more medicine, some are war veteran's..
These American's eat for dinner are only crumbs from small M & M's..
All they ever ask is to spare only a few change..
18.7/20


Government takin control having descretion not knowing whos on parol
The system workin for the oppression and not showing nation true goal
Societies lookin right at it but they dont even see
People unprotected sex getting herpes and HIV
White blood cells deminishing dont see needle injectin self sexually feeble
Women gettin prego...i aint talkin dressin they sleepin with too many people
Gun laws dropped Nra holiday...little kids getting heat killin accidental spray
Drive bys constantly running society policy so far away from the gunnin
Drugs are trafficin the streets giving ghetto child a job and somethin to eat
Coke misunderstood by society whether its powder or crak get black easily
Jails lockin dogs up like pound for sellin bones when their sentece shows murder...
Cant convict the guily only the innocent for lack of support and the bias jurror...
Tsunami hit foreign yet we still supply with out look at home front
17/20 u had a good strucutre also but it was hard for me to follow

vt/daba

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