Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004

Topic: Work Of Art

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

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I saw my death in this dream, death of my pure loves in the serene
One memorie lay still, the horse of shrill death was already deemed
intracit blueprint links will be torn with my wit ill run away yes flee
Jump to the swift of my stallion sworn to protect my awful greed
for my lover will never die without my saying, never ever willingly
as she begins weary her tired eyes begin to close so hastely
yes!..escaped the unescapable death,close this chapter as she rests
lay her down to explore this new world of unlimited possiblities
suddenly, most mysteriously, my feet are drawn to the soft clink
of a mallet and a rock, the artist on this takes time to think
moves backinto his shadows as to battle with foolish links
the sculpture holds my soul in its intricite paterns and folds
impressions of this will surely roll the years to be told
among aspireing artists, students and scholars that mold
must meet this man, mantic artist who holds such power on this rock
but as his features become visible a familiar sense of shock
as he holds his mallet in hand my pupils focus upon this crest
engraved are a man mounted on a horse with anger on his chest
i look eye and eye with death, now know the error of my ways
he smiles as hes finished with the lettering "Here lies Lyle Drake"
my pupils widen he doesnt know my identity he doesnt know my fate
articulate some words"lets have lunch"as the murderer puts down his slate
..what to do as we seperate, i ask to spend the night for this is just the bait
as this storm bursts thick and his wife begins to shake, ill lift with me a knife
.Ill Drop my curtain and let My lover sustain her Drapes.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

damn.....I always get the good ones..good verse..lets get some votes..

ur verse was good.
i liked the outcome/topic. never thought of work of art that way.
Good battle.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

I wish people would vote on our battle

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This was an nice battle..pretty close..
D@O~Nice piece..I liked the concept..it was dope..
Great vocab in the right spots..just boring..
Nothing touched me really in it..but..
I think maybe that's what you wanted..
Cry~Suprisingly nice piece since I've never heard of you..
Good vocab, a little short handed at times..still a nice piece..
Though still boring..I guess it must come with the topic..

V/-Both were nice pieces to go with the topic..
My vote goes to D@O..I was just a little more interested it..
And I think he came on top technically..
But I do hope to see more of Cry..that was a dope piece..
Props to both..

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Vote : DaO

Kry had a pretty nice verse to the topic .. A unique take on the subject .. Executed his ideas and concept nicely in this piece .. Good job ..

Dao's verse juss did this a more for me .. I liked his verse better for some reason .. He took the topic dopely .. And wrote his verse dopely .. Seemed well thought out and planned from the beggining to the end .. So he gets my vote this time around because I vibed with his verse a little more than I did Kry's .. Props to both on this battle tho .. One

okay..cool..Im glad to be back..C-sec banned me cause I beat him in Checkers on aim..lol..

Vote: DoA

DoA had a great sence on this topic a very broad delivery which made it for a goood execution. the imagry was well done...and so was the emotion very complex work.

Kry you had a goood verse but your emotio and imagry didn't show up as easily as DoA. You had a good verse a lot of good things about it but i on't think you did as well as you could have.

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