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Old 03-21-07, 10:40 PM   #1
Jay 3rd
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Hard To Find.. Some deep shit man

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iight this song is about the people i lost these past few years and how i lost them.. so i made this song to have people listen and rethink they're actions sometimes. cuz just stopping and thinkin of what could happen can save a few lives..

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Old 03-23-07, 12:24 AM   #2
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^^^^^^^^^^^uppin
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Old 03-23-07, 09:21 PM   #3
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^ stfu u aint good too...

and...i know what u gonna say
*dont talk shit when u dont make music*

lol..

u look like a fuckin crackhead.


anyways

cool beat...i used it b4...
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Old 03-26-07, 01:46 PM   #4
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oK BEAT IS COOL ALOT OF PEOPLE HAVE USED IT
yOU SOUND LIKE YOUR STRUGGELING FOR AIR OR SOMETHING
emotion is ok could be upped a little
flow is pretty good but could improve a bit
You sound like your talking in some parts you really go off beat. Try and hti the snares

Decent track
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Old 03-26-07, 06:54 PM   #5
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hahah....another jay rappin on this track....lordy lordy...yea nice concept but man, this beat needs to be shitted on....you just tell a story and dont do it justice..not to sound concited but check out how i hit this beat up...thas that kinda flow you need to hit this beat up with.....nice lyrics n concept tho...i just keep comparing it to my track n i dont think yours stacks up well .....
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