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| MoneyMaker |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
| Stackmann |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
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11-04-06, 11:26 AM
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This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
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1st bar: the first bar needed to be cut down and worded diffrent so that it could hit harder
2nd bar: i wasn't really feelin the first line in this bar....the second line was a little decent....u should probably used that as a set up for a punch 3rd bar: stretched again....same as the first bar 4th bar: i c what u were trying to do....but hate to say it to my a crew member but that line was a filler
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