U know the score

Ok...

I'm here.

Checked in.

Good luck.

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I got a heart full of pain, head full of stress
Head full of anger, held in my chest
And everything left’s a waste of time
I hate my rhymes, but hate everyone else’s more
I’m riding on the back of this pressure
Guessing that it’s better I can’t keep myself together
Because all of this stress gave me something to write on
The pain gave me something I could set my sights on
Never forget the blood sweat and tears
The uphill struggle over years the fear and
Trash talking and the people it was to
And the people that started it just like you

10 lines min 12 lines max
I set up also i will spit first
line in within 30 mins

That was his callout...

So...

Can't believe you have that name, don't ya hear the laughter...
It ain't my witty disses, it's cuz you think ya a Rapping Master!
Keeping everyone in stitches, this kid could should be an MD...
And must be a fag shoutin to the ladies: DON'T FUCK WITH ME.
Come on, kid, ya from England, ain't nothin soulfull over there...
Ya too busy kissing royal ass, despite the fact it could use some Nair!
Cuz ya know Charles is skanked, the Prince ain't what he used ta be...
But Rapping Master don't mind, he's just trying to get at little Willie.*
Come on man, let's end this before you even post, no need to bore...
And gimme my 5-0 KO, cuz yeah, bitch, I know the score.**

*Prince Charles' son is named William/penis reference...
**What he said in the 1st post

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wow great drop by btk

btk-had great punches
good personals
liked the clsoer
opener was ok
flow was good
stuerture was aight
8-10

master-ok punches work on those
personals were ok...they were there
sturtcure was messed up
flow was ok
opener was good
closer was aight
5-10

v/btk for better punches and personals

hit up the bottom battle in my sig please

Born To Kill Nice Battle
Only 1 problem im not english
Im Scottish Big Difference
and 1 more thing i dont Shout to Ladies Dont Fuck with me
also im not a fag
but apart from that good battle

It's a battle, my man...

Nothing's personal...

Well, it IS personal, but not "personal".

Ya know?

Peace

Now vote up, peeps!

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I think BTK's punch lines were good, and the SCOTTISH kid took it way too personal

Not enought posts to poll but here's what I thought.......

Uhhhhhhh.......B2K merked em'.....in pretty much every aspect...strong punches, good personals, and some nice creativity....Rapping Master...yer shit did flow...ill give you that...the problem is this sounded more like an OM
than a battle verse.......no punches or personals to speak of.....seriously, you didn't even diss yer opponent....if you expect to have a chance...you need to actually uses punches/personals...My Vote> Born To Kill(good punches, personals,and nice creativity)

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OK, this was not a battle. B2K murder-murder-murdered him. That is all.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114933

hit this up with an honest vote

yeah...born to kill wins this battle...
he had more punches..actual punches...
and personals...overall his verse was
a lot better...a lot better....so please...
vote on this battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114851

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rappin master - try doin topical... you seem to lean toward it anyway.

rapping master
I got a heart full of pain, head full of stress
Head full of anger, held in my chest
not a punch, 1/10

And everything left’s a waste of time
I hate my rhymes, but hate everyone else’s more
didnt ryhme, not a punch, 0/10

I’m riding on the back of this pressure
Guessing that it’s better I can’t keep myself together
wtf???, 1/10

Because all of this stress gave me something to write on
The pain gave me something I could set my sights on
??? 1/10

Never forget the blood sweat and tears
The uphill struggle over years the fear and
you must of bit a topical, 1/10

Trash talking and the people it was to
And the people that started it just like you
or a poem, 1/10


overall, 6/10
and i was generous.


born to kill
Can't believe you have that name, don't ya hear the laughter...
It ain't my witty disses, it's cuz you think ya a Rapping Master!
not too bad, 5/10

Keeping everyone in stitches, this kid could should be an MD...
And must be a fag shoutin to the ladies: DON'T FUCK WITH ME.
lol, not too good again, 4/10

Come on, kid, ya from England, ain't nothin soulfull over there...
Ya too busy kissing royal ass, despite the fact it could use some Nair!
blah, 4/10

Cuz ya know Charles is skanked, the Prince ain't what he used ta be...
But Rapping Master don't mind, he's just trying to get at little Willie.*
lol, wack, 4/10

Come on man, let's end this before you even post, no need to bore...
And gimme my 5-0 KO, cuz yeah, bitch, I know the score.**
lol, you were right too, 5/10


overall 22/50

qithout a percentage needed really!!


plz drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114633

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rap master
I got a heart full of pain, head full of stress
Head full of anger, held in my chest
And everything left’s a waste of time
was that even a punch?

I hate my rhymes, but hate everyone else’s more
I’m riding on the back of this pressure
same as above

Guessing that it’s better I can’t keep myself together
Because all of this stress gave me something to write on
The pain gave me something I could set my sights on
Never forget the blood sweat and tears
The uphill struggle over years the fear and
Trash talking and the people it was to
And the people that started it just like you
ok thiz plain sucked...im not gunna both with breaking it all down....

born to kill:

Can't believe you have that name, don't ya hear the laughter...
It ain't my witty disses, it's cuz you think ya a Rapping Master!
pretty good

Keeping everyone in stitches, this kid could should be an MD...
And must be a fag shoutin to the ladies: DON'T FUCK WITH ME.
lmao...this was funny..but not a good punch

Come on, kid, ya from England, ain't nothin soulfull over there...
Ya too busy kissing royal ass, despite the fact it could use some Nair!
lol...good shit

Cuz ya know Charles is skanked, the Prince ain't what he used ta be...
But Rapping Master don't mind, he's just trying to get at little Willie.*
bwahahaha

Come on man, let's end this before you even post, no need to bore...
And gimme my 5-0 KO, cuz yeah, bitch, I know the score.**
eeh...not too good..
pretty nice verse here...coulda come harder tho but there was no need to....that willie line was great

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verdict- vote easily goes to Btk...took it in every catagory

would you mind dropping a vote here? thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114714

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