http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199835
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198963

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/c...ymore_music.htm

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a nigga need feedback

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ima leave feed on ya tracks ckuz im done beefin wit u son..lo...first...nigga get a new mic makes u sound like a lil ass boy...flow is on point tho..damn that old ass belly dances line ...its all good tho...emotion is way betta then it used to be tho..lyrics is straight on the multi tip but..i dunno u aint a G...=\...it was straigt for u to do it and everything but on some real shit man i got equiptment for days 40 dollas a track man..lol...i dunno nobody that says bloodymore tho...bodymore...

million eyes...this shit is like a commercial type of feel...gun shots is a no..they not "full" enough...flow all that other shit was straight nuthin really wrong wit the track..just a lil to much gun play for me now or sumthin..its ok tho..

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thanks for that shit.. I dont kno really wtf Im doin over here with this recordin and mixin i just try lol thanks tho

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..first mc...vocals are a tad to high just a little though...your flow is real solid though man...lyrics are dope....delivery is nice...and emotion is dope...i'm not feeling the part where the gun shots comes in...u should of had a chorus...that would of been dope.but overall this is a dope track 7.5/10

rtf... beat def cool... some arabic shyt.. u come in nyce, maybe turn ya vocals up.. you got a good voice no doubt nyce presence.. danm some good words n vocab... im lovin this beat man, should send it to me... AIM: fo twenty

samples on the hook are sexy, the production is amazing on this joint, now again u come in, dunno if its cuz ur vocals are low but emotion is just a tiiiiiiny bit lackin to me... lol ive used a tetris line like that b4.. bring ya block down like tetris <that was mine... if i laced it i woulda at least said sumn over the hook, like "yea, million eyes baby!" lol... damn 3rd verse i like the best cuz u really killin tha multis with complex lyrics im feelin that.. yea all in all this was nyce, seems like with more experience u can become quite good..

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nice job on this track man, i think the quality is good, the flow was on point, the lyrics was good, reppin MD here to, nice job man....i liked this and i dont got any advice....

uppin............

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