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Old 04-24-05, 10:53 PM   #16
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Aight Check It..

Was Just Gonna Check Polls but Decided To Vote On This.

Jimmy Pockets Ya Verse Was Mediocore, Your Punches Weren't Really That Effective and You Lacked A Lot of Personals Except In The First Bar. Just An Average Battle Drope Here.

9th Degree You Mad Up Some Shit, but Overall Ya Verse Was Better. You Had Better Punches, More Personals, and More Thought Put Into Your Battle Verse. Keep My Name Outta Ya Verses Though...*Can't Wait To Merk You :-D*

Vote: 9th Degree For Overall Better Punches and Personals.

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Old 04-25-05, 10:08 PM   #17
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lol,.......^^^^^^^^^^^^
troop.........how you like that vote kiddo, gonna delete that too?
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just blacklist me like the bitch you are little one
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
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Old 05-02-05, 06:25 PM   #18
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RETURN THE FAVOR!!!

ehh i wasn't feelin this battle too much, both yall verses sounded kinda forced n lazy lol but its all good, but ima have to go wit 9th on this joint. On account of most of pocketz punches didnt' really connect or make too much sense in this battle.

JP-idk i wasn't feelin about 80% of ya verse and didn't think u tried very hard to make ya punches connect. sounded a lil forced to me. had some decent lines in there and good structure. ya flow was there but not the punches or multies to back it up, but u did have some ok personals
*pocketz best bar*=
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
^^ok bar, pretty good delivery, i've heard the concept before tho

9th degree-not the best i've seen from you, alot of ya punches didnt land either, ya had good flow and some decent personals .no multies, alot of ya bars sounded forced also. but ya had some pretty good lines in there that i liked.
9th degree's best bar=
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
^^decent attempt at a personal, and some ok setup and flow
but one of the better bars in this battle

overall=9th's verse was just barely better than pocketz neither of yall came htat hard, but 9th edged it out in my opinion.
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Old 05-03-05, 03:11 PM   #19
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Old 05-03-05, 04:32 PM   #20
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JIMMY POCKETZ-

This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
DECENT OPENER...4/10
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
DECENT...5/10
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
BLAH....FIRST LINE WAS GOOD SECOND WAS IIGHT..5/10
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
PLAYED....3/10
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
WACK........3/10
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
TTTTTEEEEERRRRIIIBBBLLLLLLEEEE CLOSER...2/10

OVERALL-22/60

9TH-

I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
GOOD OPENER...5/10
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
LOL...NICE...7/10
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
PRETTY GOOD...6/10
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
DECENT..5/10
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
COULDVE BEEN WORDED BETTER..4/10
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
NOT FEELIN IT...3/10

OVERALL-30/60

V/9TH DEGREE
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Old 05-05-05, 06:51 PM   #21
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Old 05-05-05, 10:14 PM   #22
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HAHA checking polls 9th u merked him.....Troop no hate but u washed up dawg like old dirty dishes......u fallin off cuzz?
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Old 05-06-05, 01:18 AM   #23
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Old 05-06-05, 04:46 PM   #24
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Old 05-08-05, 12:19 AM   #25
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i'm jus gonna up this one for ya ninth....c'mon ppl
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Old 05-10-05, 01:11 PM   #26
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aight, dont get me wrong, this was a good battle and all, but 9th's verse was killer

jimmy, not bad man...see you're kinda gettin back into the rhythm, but seriously, alot of the shit was just whack, or else your wordplay ruined it, no hate or anything, but lines looked like they would be good, then the punch just killed it, nothing really that special in here either, no personals, at all, which really hurts........had good structure and flow though, if that counts for anything, but keep up man

9th, nice verse man, i was laughing at alot of your lines, i kinda thought your last line was a little whack/stretched, worded at little weird, but still, overall, this verse dominated, haha, good personals, nice punches.........personals were what really killed in this one though, good job man, keep up fo-sho

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Old 05-10-05, 03:52 PM   #27
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This a Sport Ya Not Athletic.I Call u Mickey cuz u Boast Fighters
Dont hate Rv cuz ya Quotes go Un Noticed Like "Ghost Writerz"
7...decent personal and a good meta!!
1st.. u was Middleweight u Far From in Shape Flexin ya Pudge
Dizzle you wouldnt be off the "Hook" if u was Sexin Tha Judge
5...not feelin it, lines about being middleweight or wateva are just played!!
Ya Point of Discussion goes Unheard like Mimes Stoppin Scraps
Stumbling Gauzes ova 9th Degree Burns only time u Droppin Raps
7...decent meta and a good play off his name!!
Cuz ya 2 Buddie Bud with Socrates so Ima call you a Fag.Freeko
U Hood? lie in its Own u couldnt Attract Steel if u was Magneeto
3...wack and played, homo shit is played and i've used a magneto line before, want proof i got links!!
Tell the truth...U Pay 4 Puss..U Probly got ya Own "Quater Stank
Last Battle u not Gone Make it..Like Traveling on a Quater Tank
7...decent, first line was the best!!
u tha type 2 Beat Yaself... Then Pretend like u was Jus Jumped
Congrats 9th Wins Then Ashton Pm u and Say u was Jus Punked
8...LMAO!!! best part of ya verse, 2nd line was funny!!!

OVERALL: 37/60



I've improved since September, don't think I'll only beat you one time
'Cuz you're handicapped, and I don't mean your 1st 6 months of punchlines
8...LMAO!!! funny ass opener
I'm bringin' verbal murder, I doubt you could slay me, coward
We'll see the birth of a legend, and Troop organized the baby shower
6...aight line but not that good!!
I remember the "top 10" lists, somehow on most you made it
Always placed above Lay-Text, which is true - you're overrated
8...hot line!!! one of the best punchlines i seen for a while!!
Sorry, I'm a nice guy, it just depends from who you hear it
So once I kill your elevation, I'll smile and lift your spirits
7...decent line!! gud metas!!
Kid, you're not gangsta, we don't care if you don't live in a good hood
'Cuz the only way you'd get a kill...is if looks could
7...LMAO!!! some more funny lines!!
Fuck it, I ration the merking, you can't handle it all
Though you're good as gold, that wiggers buy at those stands in the mall
5...nah!!! worst part of ya verse just wasn't feelin this bar!!

OVERALL: 41/60


aight this battle was dope....jimmy came with some decent punches but i think fell off in places with a couple of played concepts, the closer was dope as hell though. 9th pretty much killed this battle with funny ass lines and hot personals that ripped Jimmy completely.

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