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Old 12-25-06, 07:48 PM   #1
Past Tense
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F.U. Pay Me ft. Prah'JECT THIS IS HOT!!!

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word up check it out

Hook - PT
Verse 1 - PT
Hook - PT
Verse 2 - Prah'Ject
Hook - PT
outro - PT


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4814935


this is going on the next KLERK MIXTAPE!!!

its a movement
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Old 12-25-06, 07:53 PM   #2
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Past Tense...u need a fast flow on this...period...Fast Tongue action...cuz u came wack on this...boring

Please...why would anyone want to listen to a slow ass flow on a beat like this...And, even if u come slow, spruce up the delivery

Hook is hot tho...But, the FUCK U part cud be mixed better...maybe add an echo...more dub...not sure...

Prahject...not feelin this at all...yall fuckin came wack on this beat

WTF man

disappointing...cuz the hook is hot...yall need to respit ur verses and write them to fit this beat


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Old 12-25-06, 07:55 PM   #3
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lol k
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Old 12-25-06, 08:28 PM   #4
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LOL Q..man..im not even gonna try tell you how wrong u is about flowing fast here..u cud do either b but eer up
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Old 12-26-06, 12:37 AM   #5
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not to take sides, but a mixture of both would be hot on this beat...come in like you did pt n speed it up...impress me, dont do shit that everyone has already done......pt you sound too reserved for this you need to get drunk befor eyou do it...you sound reserved too much

prahject.....nope not your style....just doesnt fit you, you dont sound good on it, like tooo seperated....i agree with q on the potential on this but re do ya verses with diff flow....and not the christmas lines....oh lord
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Old 12-26-06, 08:03 AM   #6
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Aight, hook comes in...to be real with y'all, I hated it the first listen. I was like wtf is up with this slow ass talking. But after a second listen, it's stuck in my head already. I'm all about the money mayneeee haha. The beat is nice too, I'm feeling it.

PT...got a laidback flow on this one but it suits the track for me cuz you sound mad arrogant lmao. Thats a good thing for this song though. Maybe you coulda tried to build it up a lil more, I like how u switch it a bit near the end of your verse. That's what I meant with building it up towards something a bit different as far as delivery is concerned. Lyrics are good, nothing too spectacular though.

Prah...I love this slower flow you got going on this track. It gives off a different energy, it ain't what we usually get from you but I'm digging it. The lyrics are good, got some better stuff here n there than PT. U got good presence, also that tad of arrogance which is totally suitable for this track. Delivery is right for this type of thing, aint what we used to hearing from you ya dig but I'm feeling it.

Pz n keep at it
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Old 12-26-06, 08:05 AM   #7
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thanks for the feeeed shorty thats real talk
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Old 12-28-06, 10:52 PM   #8
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thanks 4 the feed all

uppin this
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Old 12-29-06, 04:28 AM   #9
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some club type joint word....little real talk in there, but you abusin it a bit. it's coo though nice flow man...good quality dude. feelin ya hook a lot, t's pretty catchy man. nice ebat yup..prah ject comin in dope like ya flow..your a little more layed back with this track. overall decent track

rtf on "if the streets dont kill me"
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