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02-26-04, 09:01 AM
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New to RB
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my songz.
IP: A8FF B68F
check this out and tell what you think.
http://www.soundclick.com/viralknight and if you don't like it   |
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02-26-04, 06:16 PM
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IP: 72B0 EE71
hmmmmm......flow was off most of way...but i think u got potential dawg, some gud lyrics although some were abit played....keep droppin dawg n jus try a slightly simplier rhymin style until u get more experienced n confident on the mic.....peace!
will ya drop some feedback on my song...."change nothin" thanx!
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03-04-04, 01:33 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: E4F9 2DFA
man honestly, woznt too great...i think ya lil bro flowed better than u, lyrics were kinda shit no offence dawg u need some work.
tha remix woz .... poor too sorry. tha lyrics were aiight. u definetly need a lotta work on ya flow..definetly cuz. towards tha end u got better but still needs work. tha volume changed throughout tha whole thang so work on consitency listening to heaven sent now ... u need to up tha volume of ya voice. tha flow is definetly kinda betta than tha others. dun like how u pause from ya rappin. try n hav a chorus. tha beats aiight. keep working on ya self. u seem to hav potential but u need a lotta work. gud stuff but.. peace
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