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Old 04-19-05, 12:27 PM   #1
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hating everything

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im sick of my problems I just can't stand it
why am i in this life i never planned it
you son of a bitches making me feel down
just look at my life look at all the things around
you've neglected me now you've givin me doubt
my stress is at boiling point i need to shout
and show you what the hell im all about
with this mouth i'll blow all you fucking clowns
my mother never gave me the guidence
so you can expect a teen to resort to violence
she don't give a shit about me so im upset
she didn't realise all my pressure would effect
hows my life perfect you've really made me mad
with all the problems on top of it that i had
the problems from school have made me crazed
your gonna pay for what you've just faced
things an't lookin up still not giving a fuck
i'll problebly be killed wid a bit of luck
cuz life sucks it's way to much for me to take
im waking up everynight just waiting to break
mother your gettin older now n im still young
when things change i'll be da one havin the fun
fuckin bitch all you care about is your self
my life is ruined cuz of you so see you in hell
everything has now been blown out of proportion
what hurts me the most is dat u failed the suportin
when i had to battle this on my own wid bad self esteem
nothing is wat it seems to bad this sory had to be me
I really want a to be happy but this world will abuse you
but im only 17 and you an't gonna win I simply refuse to
people have always run me down but never again
im gonna find a new life and not gonna carry the pain
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Old 04-20-05, 06:42 PM   #2
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this was a really good deep verse i was really feeling it 9/10
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