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03-04-06, 02:38 PM | #1 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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''Gangsta Rap''
IP: C291 2B4C
NWA put gangsta rap on the map...Now they call it the ''New Crack''
Cause half these ''Niggas'' addicted to pretendin they got a strap (what?) this aint no Bra Cup, Only C's round here is Caliber Gettin You Clipped up You can run n be brave but ya rib cage is like broken contracts.. .................................................. .................Gettin Ripped Up you trip n slip up on that G Shit then the fees hit your head contracts right and center, niggas like ducks quakin for the...Bread. &on your death bed, you claimin peace for the streets...Thats weak. cause wasnt you the one actin like a big shot last week? (huh?) I'm hot like heat, and your soundin like whack emcees on repeat The emcee elite, runnin - tracks like a professional athlete... You get out lapped...Thewn pull the mack out and gasp... scared to pull, one's flyin at your skull and all you see is your past. so thru thick or thin...your the pin - stripe...known as Bitch - Like. I Hope y'all Think about ^ that the next time you jam on...This Mic. *Hands you the mic* Holla
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03-04-06, 02:48 PM | #2 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
ok pretty good but a lil short, u had some multies but i think u could have put in a few more in there. and i believe u forced in one or 2 rhymes witch doesnt really help but overall ima give u a 7.8/10 cus it was pretty good. return the favor on my open mic hellsent
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03-04-06, 07:16 PM | #3 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 43DE 867D
I was just fuckin round...
that dude tony green was gettin on my nerves so I just key'd this up quick time to take my mind off things...thats why its so short thanks for the feed tho, buuuump..
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03-04-06, 10:58 PM | #4 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 60FE 5834
FeeDbaCk:
Thiz was more of something that Ud Here on da Mic...i think i would have been able to feel it better...but overall. this was a DeCent PoSt..I cant critique to much, cuz im not that great my Self... Ya Vocab kinda on da Low, Side, try going thru a thesaurs to add more weight to ur lyrics... Otha, than that, i Think ya gonna be on da Road, u stay at it... YUP!
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03-04-06, 11:25 PM | #5 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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sdfsdfsdfds
IP: 6C9B A6D7
blah..........................................
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03-05-06, 06:03 PM | #6 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 9768 38BC
Thanks for the feed....
Sup para?
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03-05-06, 06:14 PM | #7 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 6C9B A6D7
I didn't know it was a keystyle...
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03-05-06, 06:16 PM | #8 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 9768 38BC
lol...
Meanin?
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03-05-06, 07:57 PM | #9 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: B710 5387
it was it3 k33p it up
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03-05-06, 09:12 PM | #10 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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IP: 9133 A552
This was pretty good overall. I saw a couple multies in there which was good helpin you flow and the vocab was good and everything. Nice drop wish it was a lil longer, but good job man. Please rtf on one of my freestyles. Thanks peace.
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03-06-06, 09:31 AM | #11 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 3CE9 28C7
bump.....................
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03-07-06, 08:41 AM | #12 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 2555 ADBF
Buuuuuuuump....
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