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Old 12-08-06, 09:45 AM   #1
Luse Cannon
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Punches? You out, imma bust this dudes clout
Hes why refleccz stay around
.................................................. ..... yah dime put bags in Qs mouth
Perfect opener to start a battle.

Musta had a time lapse, in the 80's you wouldn't rhyme wack
The mags off, I squirt in a bitch eye, and I beat a dime bag
Dont get this line. started off good for me just didnt end it right

Dime a silly fagget, next mag see what you really rated
After this ko, you can join my first week, and be crime affiliated
I dont feel like lookin up your first week so ima just guess this was a witty line

You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day
Good solid closer to end out an overall solid verse


Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand
and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band
ok line, couldve been a lot better

Come on theres no way Sonny can lose to this rap peasant
got upset once last week,and now S. is my anti-depressant
terrible line. off par with everything else

Cuz my flows will leave this dudes rhymebook with a superb tear
this cats got writer's block, and I'ma make him bite the curb there
aight punch wasnt really hitting though

Be aware I could hit you so fast,dat there's no time for yellin
Sonny will put a dot to finish Sir off, like doing proper spellin
Nice line. couldve worded it differently but it still works good

Not to say your verse was foul,but sum lines u shud abandon
Smash didnt throw in the white towel, he shot it out a cannon
Beautiful closer to end out the verse

Best lines was smashes opener and sonnys closer
Good battle. it was a close one to call but smash was a lil more consistant
v/smash
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