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12-08-06, 09:45 AM | #1 | ||
Loyalty proven
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IP:
Punches? You out, imma bust this dudes clout
Hes why refleccz stay around .................................................. ..... yah dime put bags in Qs mouth Perfect opener to start a battle. Musta had a time lapse, in the 80's you wouldn't rhyme wack The mags off, I squirt in a bitch eye, and I beat a dime bag Dont get this line. started off good for me just didnt end it right Dime a silly fagget, next mag see what you really rated After this ko, you can join my first week, and be crime affiliated I dont feel like lookin up your first week so ima just guess this was a witty line You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day Good solid closer to end out an overall solid verse Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band ok line, couldve been a lot better Come on theres no way Sonny can lose to this rap peasant got upset once last week,and now S. is my anti-depressant terrible line. off par with everything else Cuz my flows will leave this dudes rhymebook with a superb tear this cats got writer's block, and I'ma make him bite the curb there aight punch wasnt really hitting though Be aware I could hit you so fast,dat there's no time for yellin Sonny will put a dot to finish Sir off, like doing proper spellin Nice line. couldve worded it differently but it still works good Not to say your verse was foul,but sum lines u shud abandon Smash didnt throw in the white towel, he shot it out a cannon Beautiful closer to end out the verse Best lines was smashes opener and sonnys closer Good battle. it was a close one to call but smash was a lil more consistant v/smash
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