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02-08-04, 09:34 PM
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(1) Group B Match: Rule v Weapon M8
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Pick a colour. There's your topic. Further details in main match thread.
Haiku - 5 syllables first line. 7 syllables second line. 5 syllables third line. DEADLINE: Monday 16th February Last edited by varentao : 02-08-04 at 09:57 PM. |
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02-09-04, 08:53 PM
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In....
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02-11-04, 10:54 PM
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Red Carries On Blood But It Also Remains Pure Representing Love My First Haiku...I Don't Think I Have Every line Exact For Syllables But I Tryed Edited It...and I apoligize i thought it was a number of those stanzas...peace
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 Last edited by rule : 02-12-04 at 08:09 PM. |
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02-12-04, 09:48 AM
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^Er, well though i dig what you did. You only post ONE haiku. So only ONE of those 'stanzas'. We might take up 'extended' types later on in the tournament.
So could you please cut it down to one haiku. |
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02-12-04, 08:08 PM
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oh sorry i thought a haifu was a number of those....sorry about that...i'll fix it
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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02-12-04, 08:16 PM
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^As far as i can see, your syllable structure is 5-7-5.
Thanks for ammending it anyway. Let's hope WeaponM8 shows up. |
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02-16-04, 05:11 AM
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^ if not ill gladly fill in
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02-16-04, 07:18 PM
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^Okay, you're in if WeaponM8 doesn't drop by the end of today. Come up with a Haiku for Wednesday. So if he does turn up, you'll take the place of someone else (unless EVERYONE shows up, which is unlikely..). That's two days time. Thanks.
Eki replaces WeaponsM8 if he doesn't drop within the next 7 or so hours. |
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02-17-04, 09:12 PM
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Ocean and the Sky are lungs of the planet earth both are now depressed Edit : Ok finally got the syllables right  Last edited by Eki : 02-18-04 at 12:32 AM. |
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02-17-04, 10:30 PM
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who cares close enough lol
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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02-17-04, 10:52 PM
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Eki - Yeah, your haiku is 4-5-5. But your deadline is thursday, so there's time to ammend it.
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