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Old 10-01-07, 02:14 PM   #1
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Mystic. (1-0) vs. don cardyac (1-2)

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It was a quick, rough week.. and everyone dropped speedy, some losing to their amazing surprise. Maybe it was just too fast for anyone to tell? Who knows. In 4 days beef was started, there were call outs, open mics made... People made examples of: the works.

You know how it is though, you get what you throw.

Make examples of your opponent this week. It's week 4 and things are just getting heated. If you don't win it's either because everybody hates you, or dickriding. I promise.

There's a 3-way, so I gotta give these heads a shoutout:

F.oo, don't make yourself look stupid again and lose. It's your chance to make a change on your record and prove you're the better man out of most.
K-M... you lost twice and you keep trying, I think you're staying because you wanna elevate. And that's promise, you get your ass kicked here, and you'll be better, but if you win here, you'll already prove you're a quick learner.
WickedOne .......... Warm welcome to the league man

Battles Up: Monday Mid-Day, 12:00-2:00 PM Eastern.
Check-ins Due: Wednesday Morning, 5 AM Eastern.
Punches Due: Friday Morning, 5 AM Eastern.
Battle Closes: Sunday Midnight Eastern.

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Old 10-01-07, 02:40 PM   #2
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im already checkin in, i thought i was gettin ransum..but this is coo too.
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Old 10-02-07, 12:33 PM   #3
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i've already beaten u once in FL..guess i'll do it here to.


Verse so hot, im makin acid pour outa cardyacs mouth
Give him time to reflex...............
Cuz He aint even checkin n im already wiping his verse out!
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Old 10-02-07, 01:11 PM   #4
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check, wassup mystic good luck. oh i thought that u only post battles on fridays, well good thing i checked up on it. lemme go off da head. i hope y'all get it cuz erytime i post y'all overlook wordplay. and i gotta explain it so y'all really get it. but i aint no cry baby so F it. just read carefully.
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Old 10-02-07, 01:11 PM   #5
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they call u mystic cuz, u get dudes lips wet like they rehydrated/
& i'm hot, so i'm a pop ya cap open, ta wet up the dry places/
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Old 10-02-07, 01:29 PM   #6
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Vote: Mystic

Don's line sounded like he wanted to have sex with mystic more than good wordplay...and i understand all you popin tops shit...which is really really played out....
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Old 10-02-07, 01:39 PM   #7
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for those who need a breakdown.a mystic is a drink. idk if its erywhere, but in DC its a drink. and wettin' something means blood splattering after a shooting. that might clear up some of the metaphor 4 y'all. i try make it not so simple and predictable but when i dont dumb it down than people usually dont get it until i explain it. then they be like "oh damn!, yeah that was jy ill, but its too late to vote now."
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Old 10-02-07, 01:41 PM   #8
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ummm....no, the bar you dropped was played as shit..i knew that Mystic was a type of soda, and that whole poppin the top thing....all that is PLAYED the fuck out.....

like i said before, you usally dont come as bad as this, but your bar was just plain ass old...
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Old 10-02-07, 02:07 PM   #9
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v/ Mystic

Better punch...don's shit was played out and didnt hit hard...
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Old 10-02-07, 02:36 PM   #10
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I didnt know mystic was a soda, but either way wasnt really feeling the punch, keep trying though Cardyac', Vote goes to Mystic
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Old 10-02-07, 09:47 PM   #11
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okay first of all. don needs to stop swaying .

second of all, can u all give me some feed on my punch?
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Old 10-02-07, 11:39 PM   #12
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word. so much swaying going down in here.

plus i thought we were only allowed to post bars only in the battles.....

anyways, mystic, ive seen harder drops outta you. i thought you self-glorified more than throwing a punch, but the punch concept was still sorta there.

don, you said that if we read shit carefully about yours that we would see this fantastic wordplay. i didnt see it dude. you had to post a whole paragraph to explain yourself bro. ppl dont wanna read shit and try to figure out what your trying to say, we just wanna read it and go OHHH SNAAAAPPP!!! THAT WAS ILL!!! just come right out with the punch dude. im not dissing you tho, just advice man.

anyways, in the end it was a bit of a weak battle but mystic took it here.
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Old 10-03-07, 12:06 AM   #13
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Weak battle.

v/Mystic, just a little better.
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Old 10-03-07, 09:18 AM   #14
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5-0 me, i guess i liked my punch more then anyone else haha. Did u guys atleast get the whole acid reflex thing?

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Old 10-03-07, 09:58 AM   #15
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they call u mystic cuz, u get dudes lips wet like they rehydrated/
& i'm hot, so i'm a pop ya cap open, ta wet up the dry places/

1st line: i know mystic is a drink like an ICE-TEA drink NOT A SODA just to clear that up for my friend who thought it was a soda but it flow good aight set up....
2ed line: i get what u mean because im more of a raw im'a shit on you then piss on ya face after i tear ya eyes out and make you eat'em like a fruit snack cuz thats raw and thats what i like but it still wasnt that Raw and i know you can do better then that it wasnt to creative but decent....

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Verse so hot, im makin acid pour outa cardyacs mouth
Give him time to reflex...............
Cuz He aint even checkin n im already wiping his verse out!

1st line: 1st line decent flow and set up...
2ed line: decent hit... when u have acid pour outta ya mouth they useally call it an acid relecks when u jag and like errl in ya mouth a bit.... then u whipe it off which u refer it to as u whiping hes verse out like you errl a bit of acid in ya mouth.... decent hit.... i like it....

vote: mystic hand down....

Don: i've seen you drop harder kid dont worry about having to explain to much for them that i've learn from last week battle with 2v.... so fuck it and keep doing you....
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