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Old 06-15-08, 09:36 PM   #1
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Flight ( 4 ) vs Kirk ( 3 )

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Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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Old 06-16-08, 01:24 AM   #2
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i'll probly go about 14.
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Old 06-16-08, 01:26 AM   #3
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Alright. I'll match.
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Old 06-17-08, 06:27 PM   #4
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he use to be OneStepBeyond, just so you know, not trying to get ahead of anything, it was just a long time ago, thats all, g'l dude

rockin' a fake record, but i'll still let ya back down and concede
cause truth is he does have losses... fact is one of em was from me
i'm way ahead of your game, and you know i'm not lying bro
cause you use to be OneStepBeyond*, but shit, that was a long time ago
but really, i'm rock ya hard and show ya how to drop dope
your punches really eat Dick... so you're REALLY lucky he no showed
i'll bash this trekky, my wits are faster than light, while his go beyond poor
so we all sit and laugh as Captain Kirk goes where no man has ever gone before
you're just on a bad course, so i'll feed ya punches again and again
cause you really are special, K... .. you never can hold your weight in the end
seriously, you dont' have shit dude, no point creating lies
i could light half of you on fire, and it still wouldn't spark your creative side
i'm going to let you fall here, but its a little different from what you said...
i didn't have to burn ya down man... i knew you were a push-over instead
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Old 06-17-08, 06:47 PM   #5
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Nice drop, man. I'll probably post up this evening.
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Old 06-18-08, 02:40 PM   #6
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His name used to be Drakel. For those who don't know. Alright.



Dude can act like beatin' Lay was legit. But he knows whats true,
Cause you don't gotta say it, DRakel. You got DR written all over you,
But you can't 'worm' your way outta this one. The best have tried,
And with corn row concepts? I'm quick to toss this pesticide,
I'm takin' this. Those who think otherwise, thats a mistake dike,
But you'll see that I'm wright brother, just before I take Flight,
So, please quit tossin gay lnes. I'm no tryna be mean and wrong,
But I ain't seen fruit punch this much since my senior prom,
Poor bitch, must look like your home got hit with mortars,
Thats why what I buy soda with, you have to use as 'living quarters,'
As for your relationships. Chicks a bag of bones, saggy in several ways,
It's fucked up when you put your hand up her skirt and reach second base.
Worst part is though. I think you bite, somethin' I can't stand, bro.
But funny. Cause even your pirated puches never land-hoe.
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Old 06-18-08, 02:42 PM   #7
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Goodluck, pretty good battle, I think.
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Old 06-18-08, 03:15 PM   #8
Lay.
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rockin' a fake record, but i'll still let ya back down and concede
cause truth is he does have losses... fact is one of em was from me
don't kno if this is true..eh attempt unless its a true personal.
i'm way ahead of your game, and you know i'm not lying bro
cause you use to be OneStepBeyond*, but shit, that was a long time ago
decent.
but really, i'm rock ya hard and show ya how to drop dope
your punches really eat Dick... so you're REALLY lucky he no showed
lol.
i'll bash this trekky, my wits are faster than light, while his go beyond poor
so we all sit and laugh as Captain Kirk goes where no man has ever gone before
eh.
you're just on a bad course, so i'll feed ya punches again and again
cause you really are special, K... .. you never can hold your weight in the end
good flip on a played concept.
seriously, you dont' have shit dude, no point creating lies
i could light half of you on fire, and it still wouldn't spark your creative side
eh..not that harsh
i'm going to let you fall here, but its a little different from what you said...
i didn't have to burn ya down man... i knew you were a push-over instead
lol ok.

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Dude can act like beatin' Lay was legit. But he knows whats true,
Cause you don't gotta say it, DRakel. You got DR written all over you,
ok.
But you can't 'worm' your way outta this one. The best have tried,
And with corn row concepts? I'm quick to toss this pesticide,
decent.
I'm takin' this. Those who think otherwise, thats a mistake dike,
But you'll see that I'm wright brother, just before I take Flight,
ok.
So, please quit tossin gay lnes. I'm no tryna be mean and wrong,
But I ain't seen fruit punch this much since my senior prom,
eh..
Poor bitch, must look like your home got hit with mortars,
Thats why what I buy soda with, you have to use as 'living quarters,'
lol nice wp.
As for your relationships. Chicks a bag of bones, saggy in several ways,
It's fucked up when you put your hand up her skirt and reach second base.
lmao.
Worst part is though. I think you bite, somethin' I can't stand, bro.
But funny. Cause even your pirated puches never land-hoe.
k.


I knew this would be a good battle, but I think Kirk edged it out with more consistency. Only line I wasn' feelin from Kirk was his played fruit punch line. Flight's opener would only be solid if it was true,..which I'm not sure if it is. An the capt' kirk nameplay n creative side punches were weak imo. Good showing guys.


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Old 06-20-08, 08:39 AM   #9
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rockin' a fake record, but i'll still let ya back down and concede
cause truth is he does have losses... fact is one of em was from me
EHHH

i'm way ahead of your game, and you know i'm not lying bro
cause you use to be OneStepBeyond*, but shit, that was a long time ago
EHHH

but really, i'm rock ya hard and show ya how to drop dope
your punches really eat Dick... so you're REALLY lucky he no showed
NO NOT REALLY

i'll bash this trekky, my wits are faster than light, while his go beyond poor
so we all sit and laugh as Captain Kirk goes where no man has ever gone before
OKISH

you're just on a bad course, so i'll feed ya punches again and again
cause you really are special, K... .. you never can hold your weight in the end
OKISH ...PLAYED

seriously, you dont' have shit dude, no point creating lies
i could light half of you on fire, and it still wouldn't spark your creative side
DOPE

i'm going to let you fall here, but its a little different from what you said...
i didn't have to burn ya down man... i knew you were a push-over instead
OKISH
OMG THIS JUST DESTROYED WHAT I THOUGHT OF U LAST WEEK
vs

Dude can act like beatin' Lay was legit. But he knows whats true,
Cause you don't gotta say it, DRakel. You got DR written all over you,
DOPE

But you can't 'worm' your way outta this one. The best have tried,
And with corn row concepts? I'm quick to toss this pesticide,
OKISH

I'm takin' this. Those who think otherwise, thats a mistake dike,
But you'll see that I'm wright brother, just before I take Flight,
NICE

So, please quit tossin gay lnes. I'm no tryna be mean and wrong,
But I ain't seen fruit punch this much since my senior prom,
HAHA NICE

Poor bitch, must look like your home got hit with mortars,
Thats why what I buy soda with, you have to use as 'living quarters,'
EHHH THIS DOES N DOESNT MAKE SENSE...MORE NOT THO

As for your relationships. Chicks a bag of bones, saggy in several ways,
It's fucked up when you put your hand up her skirt and reach second base.
HAHA DOPE

Worst part is though. I think you bite, somethin' I can't stand, bro.
But funny. Cause even your pirated puches never land-hoe.
TOO FORCED BUT OK

V/ KIRK
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Old 06-22-08, 10:38 AM   #10
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rockin' a fake record, but i'll still let ya back down and concede
cause truth is he does have losses... fact is one of em was from me
bland personal
i'm way ahead of your game, and you know i'm not lying bro
cause you use to be OneStepBeyond*, but shit, that was a long time ago
straightforward but it hit ok
but really, i'm rock ya hard and show ya how to drop dope
your punches really eat Dick... so you're REALLY lucky he no showed
lmao. concept was funny, wording wasnt very good
i'll bash this trekky, my wits are faster than light, while his go beyond poor
so we all sit and laugh as Captain Kirk goes where no man has ever gone before
concept was good again. setup needed to be related to the punch. cos it wasn't the punch didn't connect cos there was no target to it
you're just on a bad course, so i'll feed ya punches again and again
cause you really are special, K... .. you never can hold your weight in the end
decent punch
seriously, you dont' have shit dude, no point creating lies
i could light half of you on fire, and it still wouldn't spark your creative side
clever concept, worded well. decent line
i'm going to let you fall here, but its a little different from what you said...
i didn't have to burn ya down man... i knew you were a push-over instead
not bad

Dude can act like beatin' Lay was legit. But he knows whats true,
Cause you don't gotta say it, DRakel. You got DR written all over you,
worded wrong. the punch was fine but the setup shoulda been directed differently
But you can't 'worm' your way outta this one. The best have tried,
And with corn row concepts? I'm quick to toss this pesticide,
corn row concepts? im not sure what that means. pesticide wordplay is played.
I'm takin' this. Those who think otherwise, thats a mistake dike,
But you'll see that I'm wright brother, just before I take Flight,
liked this. well worded n hit hard
So, please quit tossin gay lnes. I'm no tryna be mean and wrong,
But I ain't seen fruit punch this much since my senior prom,
fruit punch lines are played
Poor bitch, must look like your home got hit with mortars,
Thats why what I buy soda with, you have to use as 'living quarters,'
eh
As for your relationships. Chicks a bag of bones, saggy in several ways,
It's fucked up when you put your hand up her skirt and reach second base.
lmaoooooooooooooo. this was dope
Worst part is though. I think you bite, somethin' I can't stand, bro.
But funny. Cause even your pirated puches never land-hoe.
lol corny but funny

this was cloooose. i thought it came down to 1 line n that was kirk's second base line. that edged it his way imo.

v/ kirk
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Old 06-22-08, 08:56 PM   #11
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Kirk wins 3 votes to none.

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