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DisasterPeice420 4 44.44%
SPuL 5 55.56%
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Old 04-16-04, 06:02 PM   #31
YoungStar*
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From: that Austin Tex 512 reppin Kileen to tha fullest
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i don't kno who the hell to vote for
spul-good punches good personals good structure good rymes good flow

DisasterPeice-good personal, lacking punches that landed hard-u had a few but spul had more that hit harder...i had to reread this one cuz at first i thought u had it but i re read it and saw that spul got this one

vote-spul
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Old 04-16-04, 06:06 PM   #32
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From: ☆•°•☆яαρvεяεѕε☆•°•☆
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DAMN PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' .... About Time Some Votes Get Dropped In This Battle!! Shit's Been Going On!!! And Re-Opened For Far To Long... So If You Are Going To Drop A Vote!!!!!!! You Will Need To Explain The Person You "VOTED FOR" .. Just Dont!!! Drop A Vote Like This

Personals:
Punches:
Structure:
Multies:
Flow:
Verse:
WordPlay:
Vocab:

Explain Your DAMN VOTE!!

Lol' ... & Still Uppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

.......

Drop Some "Honest Votes" On This Shit!!! ... And I Will Return The Favor' If You Could Hit Me Up With The Links' ..!! No Matter Who You Vote For!! .. I Will Most Deff Return The Favor!!

Sure Appriciate it!!


Upppppppppppin 4 Explained Votes' ...!! (Honest Ones)

.... Don't Drop A D/R Vote' Just Because I Voted For You! Ah Ha - - - Be Straight Up!!!

- - - Thanks - - -

****C'Mon Yall Don't SLeep On This Shit DAMN!!!! WTF Does It Take To Get Some Honest Votes Around Hear' With Explination!!!



((((((((((Can We Get Some More Votes)))))))))))) On This Battle' ... C'Mon Now

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Old 04-16-04, 06:09 PM   #33
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aiight, uppin'. Jus when I thought I was out. lol
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Old 04-16-04, 06:27 PM   #34
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here is the break down

Personals:
Punches:Spul
StructureP
Multies:Spul
Flow:Spul
Verse:dp
WordPlay:None
Vocab:None

There was basicly nothing that stood out in this battle, i voted beacuse i try to vote for must see's and Dp is one fine motha. Just joking, but dp hola at the kid and no hate

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Old 04-16-04, 06:28 PM   #35
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Lmfao' !!! @ Phat Mic' ............... Thanks' !! Appriciate The Compliment
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Old 04-16-04, 06:28 PM   #36
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Opps structure is DP and personals are Spul
 
Old 04-16-04, 06:31 PM   #37
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lol I thought I was out. But I still gotta chance. Uppin' for votes. 4-3 Disaster.
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Old 04-16-04, 06:42 PM   #38
B_Loco
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From: Steel City
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errr...i shouldnt even vote on dis.this battle is onesided lol really tho. so heres the break down:
Structure: dP...for the fact her shit was easier to read
Flow: dP...for the fact she kept da whole thang flowin while the utha guy lost me in a few points
Vocab: dP....not buy that much,she just had a few more words that got her this category
Punches: Tie...i really dont know if i seen any
Opener: SpuL wins this category kuz da shit was funny
Closer: SpuL gets this one for the "d-ray" line at the end..shyt was nice
Creativity: Tie..both emcees was good and creative

Overall Vote: dP...she just had a better flow...SpuL u lost me a couple times...u came back on track tho playa..but dP kept the flow goin all da way.

**note drop an honest vote on C_R_E_A_M Vs Shady Genius 4-1 [im winin]
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Old 04-17-04, 02:53 PM   #39
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From: bedrock
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check it nice battle by both peeps both got off 2 some nice start both came hard check it

spul-u had a nice flow wit some hott punches good ass personals but on 1 junk u used hoe like twice so u couldve got creative wit dat but on da other hand nice drop

disaster-u had a descent drop yo shit was consistant all the way thru wit some punches nice vocab along the way some personals

spul:

bestline-At not following rules… you are definitely the master
I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster

^^^^ wheeew hot way 2 kill her man u used her username against her in a hot way

worsteline-irl, I’m not one to be fucked wit. I be 8-2, yo
The crowd be lovin’ me… while they be booin’ you, hoe

^^^^^ 2 simple couldve got creative on dat

disaster-

bestline-You Talk Out Your A$$ Your 'Verbal-Disability-Spews',/
The Talent You Think You Got Im Sure You Breathe Through Ur 'A$$-Too',/

^^^^^ dat was tight feelin dat lady

worsteline-I'll Chop You Down To Size, You Embody The 'Word-Nerd',/
I'm The Lyrcally Un-Balanced, Bitch I Got Respect 'Nigga-Word',/

sounds more like of a freestyle more than a battle....

spul-

punches-9/10
vocab-8.5/10
personals-9/10
structure-10/10
open-9/10
end-9.5/10
overall-9.2/10

disaster-
punches-9/10
vocab-8.2/10
personals-9/10
structure-10/10
open-8.9/10
end-9.3/10
overall-9/10

winner spul
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Old 04-17-04, 04:53 PM   #40
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breakdown for disator:
rymes 8/10
style 7/10
punches 8/10
your best line:
UnderStand You Cant Lie Or Deny "While-Under-Oath',/
You Can't Rap Or Free But Still Your 'Trying-To-Do-Both',/

breakdown for spul: rymes 8/10
style8/10
punches9/10
i like good punches so i would say thats what won him tha battle
you both did sweet, but spul wanted it so he tryed harder and put more into it my vote goes to spul by the way ur best line was:
At not following rules… you are definitely the master
I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster
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Old 04-17-04, 04:56 PM   #41
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aiight, guess this got reopened. Aiight 4-4. Uppin'. BREAKDOWN THE VOTE OR IT WON'T COUNT!!!
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Old 04-17-04, 05:30 PM   #42
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It says it's 4-4, but Phat Mic's vote, which was explained well got DQed. I think I might have won. well, anywyas uppin'
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Old 04-18-04, 12:34 AM   #43
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Aight peeps, this was a very good battle.

Personals: You both had good Peronly's, but Spul try to get at her with something rather then the fact that she is a girl. Disaster had better Peronly's because she got you at every wich angle.
Punches: Both had good punches, I liked Spul's punches better because they hit hard as disaster's punches were good, but Spul's had better punchlines I though.
Structure: You both had good structures. I call this a tie, they were botch solid flows.
Multies: I didn't see much Multi's, but the both of you had the same about of Multi's, and I didn't see any decent ones from either of ya.
Verse: Disaster, the verse was too long. A verse that is too long means that some weak rhymes were in there that made the Verse stand out as not as hot. Shorten it, and make sure the verse is solid and hard hitting, this won't happen with a long verse like that. Not saying that I wasn't feelin' it, I think it would of been better off shorter which could of made a lot of your punches better. Spul, I liked your verse because you keep with a nice rhyme scheme.
WordPlay/Vocab: Lots of Wordplay here. I saw the same amount from both of ya, you both had a decent Vocab and tied them together to make some rhymes really sick. You both had a good perspective on this subject, both covered it well.
Originality: Spul defintly takes this one, there was too much fiction in your rhymes Disaster but you worked it out. Spul had a nice original touch.

This was a good battle and vote is very honest. I'll have to give it to Spul because his flow was so original and kept it in motion. Great battle!
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