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1 | 16.67% |
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5 | 83.33% |
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08-08-04, 10:58 PM
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IP: 668E 7881
Voted For: e-dubz
definatly clear cut win...dubz had better punches hands down |
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08-09-04, 01:27 AM
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.:So~So~Good:.
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IP: 75B6 C69F
Voted For: e-dubz
E-Dubz=That was a decent lil verse.I take it in line 3 you made that word "cents" so it make it look like you wasn't rhyming the same word,but I caught on.Nice ender. Bang=Umm..the punches were just not hard enough.Those punches could have been better.And next time,try to make your structure more even so it would flow better.
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