didnt get any feedbak on the other thing so i decidedto post on here
quick keystyle new to rv

walkin through the maze trying to reach my goal
finding the key to success watchin the truth unfold
is life ever perfect never tragic i think not
without conflict well never grow just give it a thought
so im ready
ready to face the lingering storms
never trusting anybody but myself cuz their truth is deformed
they lie and they tear ur soul apart
cuz they dont have ur best intersts at heart
so im walkin still walkin in the maze
coming to another turn passing through another phase
now im not even sure wat my goal is
why is my mind fading in to the abyss
stress deceptions and lies from close friends choking me
never letting me free so i can be wat im destined to be
i try to cut the rope but i cant do it alone
im going deeper and the pit is encased in stone
i try to claw myself out but there is no hope
cuz im still choking drugs were the rope
but then i see a glitter from above
my parents had come to show me some love
they raise me up take me high away fom the mess
and moved me to a another location so i can reflect
where my life was going i guess i took a wrong turn
nowi thank god that i can return
to the right path still fight valiently
fighting the temptations and succedding to sum decree

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3153477
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3153481

Uh Itz Simple......... Has The Potential To Be Killa Shit But You Got A Long Way To Go

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thanks for the critique-like i said im new to this lol