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franchiZe 0 0%
$$UPREME 5 100.00%
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Old 04-14-04, 12:13 PM   #1
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$$UPREME VS. franchiZe

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I Set Up ...
U Drop First......
House Rulez...new B..
That's No D/r..
No Pre-written..
No Hate Votes.. Explained Votes...
No Vampires.....
And No Recycled Shit...lets Go..
 
Old 04-14-04, 12:16 PM   #2
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hey i'll vote on this if you guys vote on mine first..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119158
 
Old 04-14-04, 02:50 PM   #3
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yo yo, i'm ready 2 slaughter ya ass

i'm gonna step into this battle all crazed like a gun toting fool//
with both pistols raised i open fire leavin ure dead ass in a blood red pool//
u call ureself $$upreme but the those two dollars is all ure shit's worth//
me, i'm a freestylin genius who's been spittin his shit since birth//
and seriously, what's wiv the supreme cuz we all know ure shits wack//
tha only reason u wanted me to spit first is cuz u aint got a sack//
u really just a bitch in disguise and this shits getting tired//
i'm a straight up demolitions expert and i've got u loaded and wired//
i'm ready and set to take you down my hand is on the detonation switch//
this is tha world of rap battles, there ain't no time for u, a wannabe bitch//
i've heard ure lyrics they're generic like u some sort of programmed machine//
these rappers are tired of u, ure a virus.........and i'm the vaccine//
i spit tha shit whilst u shit tha spit, i leave u on the ground in an epileptic fit//
my mental capacity is slippin and i can feel myself goin insane//
i got invincible skills gettin pumped from my brain and u better be prepared to feel my pain//
this aint a battle its a full on war and i'm declarin no-holds barred//
i'm gonna rip through you like a deranged psychotic leaving u mentally scarred//
u know i'm through wiv u, i'm out, it's time for the wannabe//
let's check mister no skills cuz u know he's gonna use my shit against me.//
 
Old 04-14-04, 09:22 PM   #4
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Stop Writing So Much......
Franchize U Wasting Lines..............






Your Crew Is Coming Next... But First Im Bout To Demolish You*
You Should Think-twice I'm Sharper Then A Ken-swo I'll Split Your Brain In Two*

It's Like Your Fighting-mirrors The Way Your Ryhmes-can't-reflect*
Your Punches Dont Back-fire Like Boomer-rangs With Defects*

Laughing-2-death Is Just 1 Concept Of Killing Billy*
Your Boxing-a-comedian Cuz My Punchlines Are Slapping-u-silly*

Flows Will Leave Ya Shocked For A While*
Like Electricity Being Droped With Paranoid-swimmers My Spit Got You Panicing In-da-nile*(indenial)

Like Broken-pencils Your Having Trouble Getting Your Point Across*
Even Lead-mechanics Couldn't Fix The Solution Of You Not Getting A Loss*


LET THE BEST MAN WIN.......................
 
Old 04-14-04, 09:49 PM   #5
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lets up these votes people
gud spit $$upreme but that was a wack ass spit from me
my shit gets 2 long but now its fixed
i'm spittin fresh shit so win or lose, i want a rematch when i got a space free
HOLLA.
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:23 PM   #6
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Why Does Everybody Want A Rematch Before Da Votes....
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:25 PM   #7
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Is It Cuz U Know U Lost???
Or Because Your Trying To Make A Excuse......(not Doing Yo Best)
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:26 PM   #8
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Here's Some Advice.....franchize...
Make Your Shit Eligble....
And Shorter.....
 
Old 04-14-04, 10:29 PM   #9
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i'll use that advice homey

cud u do me a favour and vote on my other battles

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335
 
Old 04-14-04, 11:51 PM   #10
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Can't ..computer Is Not Good Wit Links....
Sorry...
We Need Votes...
 
Old 04-15-04, 12:03 PM   #11
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uppin 4 votes.................
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
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Old 04-15-04, 12:03 PM   #12
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^^^^jus fuckin around thats what $$upreme always says
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Old 04-15-04, 02:24 PM   #13
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fuckin up these votes man i need to finish my battles

vote on mine and i'll vote on ures

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335
 
Old 04-15-04, 05:43 PM   #14
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aight
breakdown..the shortie verision
$$umpreme won becuz of his structure his meta4s his word usage and his puches

but on the other hand
Franchize had some ok lyrics and some punches that weren't badd at all..i ain't madd at ya playa

but as it is
Vote-$$umpreme
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Old 04-15-04, 05:57 PM   #15
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aight well pretty good lines from both...

Supreme: i was feeling ur lines more
Punchlines and Personals were really strong especialy
Like Broken-pencils Your Having Trouble Getting Your Point Across*
Even Lead-mechanics Couldn't Fix The Solution Of You Not Getting A Loss*
Vocab and Structure
pretty complex voacb and good structure
and the flow aswell was extremly good

franchiZe: wasn't really feeling ur lines
Punchlines and Personals were pretty good but Supremes were better and thats what lost u the battle
Vocab and structure were your strogest points
and flow was ectremely well
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