Trying To Do it

In town vital with a sound title like car owners find
Bazaar donors to this lame game just goners of the blind
Here with Ebonics like stereophonic record songs and
Avoid wrong contracts, some you can’t payback trapped no plan
Sophistication of the wealthy can twist a situation unhealthy
Like a divorce court the force support the female very stealthy
Rap more art while cats sore at heart about my success
On route to progress like promotions on jobs after tests
An ocean of slobs rest after failing multiple choice quests
Try elude clown that be on rude grounds like illegal
Fence post they’re dense most the time like an eagle
They’re birds of prey even nerds say beware but who
Dare cross me got a boss spree of rhymes that’s brand new
With a plan true I’m a tough baby with a powder puff lady
Get her wet stuff go crazy in bed lips thin and red can’t phase me
Butter by the pound when I utter sounds of corrupt vibrations
And duck citations from the police in the streets up relations
Between gangs got mean fangs like vampires bring devastation
Suck the blood of microphones cats try drive stakes in my heart
And often look for my coffin

Forced rhymes, makes no sense.

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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Xenofly thanks for the crit doe

on a course blind with forced rhymes put up with criticism hard to foot the rhythm of dissatisfaction too much brisk action from replies a thug from streets but love my peeps even though they in the club with heat

^^^ much betta. U kno wat ur doin ur just forcin it into ur raps but u let that last little lyric flow.

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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yea i agree wi him, not to good.......keep elevatin boi i know u can do it u got a lot of potentioal......hey yo put some feedback on mine...........DRAMA