Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

200 Posts+ (Vote)
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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-22-07 at 04:55 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

®enagade has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-07 04:28 AM.

Terumoto has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-07 04:31 AM.

blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this
even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch
No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty
Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty
You hit girly.. The truth is your rhymin' is shit,
I'd retire 'n quit if I rhymed just a bit like the lines that you spit
If you get a single vote, I'll know that you were offering sodomy
And naturally, in that case, I expect an honest apology.
Yes, I realize my work contains nothing of merit or worth,
but I don't have to write a personalized verse for it to hurt.

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Voted For: Terumoto

Turnumono:
blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this
even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch
No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty
Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty

vs

Ren:
comin to me for beef? please! I hope you like your fuckin steak tuff
and as far as greatness? you'll never c-era like bow-wow after the break up

OVERALL:
This was a pretty decent battle, but I am givin' my vote to T. He had the better punches and his verse was more creative.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241446

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Voted For: Terumoto

Terumoto got this...rhymes hit harder nd kept my attention

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i aint voting.....only cuz of all the times i begged you asshole "vets" to come and vote in this section n you all acted like complete assholes to us......

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Nobody has ever begged me to vote around here. Gkillaz dropped a vote and I rtfed, like a normal person would.

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Voted For: ®enagade

your punches wack! and your delivery takin you nowhere like a barge in dirt
you wouldnt have electrafying a-bill-a-tees if you fuckin charged your shirts
decent word-play...
seriously! step back from attacks or get your neck cracked cause you text wack
your transformation is about as hopeless as post op transexuals gettin their sex back
bad flow, decent diss...
think your competin with me? please bitch your bravato gettin old
seriously kid! your just a minor problem to me like diomand mines without coal
decent...
comin to me for beef? please! I hope you like your fuckin steak tuff
and as far as greatness? you'll never c-era like bow-wow after the break up
nah not feeling this...
this shits done and over!!
............far as im concerned to me you literally and lyrically dead
cuz we all know it must have been an optical illusion,
........................ that u were even on my level in the title of the thread!!
ok ending...

not a bad verse...


blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this
even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch
WEAK start...
No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty
Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty
nice...
You hit girly.. The truth is your rhymin' is shit,
I'd retire 'n quit if I rhymed just a bit like the lines that you spit
nah..
If you get a single vote, I'll know that you were offering sodomy
And naturally, in that case, I expect an honest apology.
just flowing...
Yes, I realize my work contains nothing of merit or worth,
but I don't have to write a personalized verse for it to hurt.
weak ending...

Voted For: Terumoto

renagade- your verse was just hard to read..your structure and shit made it so hard for it to flow and your punches just werent up to par man, i wasn't really feeling much of a strong verse except for that bow wow line...was pretty funny..overall 1/10

terumoto-your verse wasn't that strong either though it was funny how you made a mockery of your opponent and even though you used no personals you still made him look stupid and easily took the battle..you had better flow and your punches and wittiness won you this battle overall 5/10

v/terumoto

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Voted For: Terumoto

V/ Terumoto.

Even though he didn't have that many punches, he came simply better. His verse flowed better. If you compare the 2, his work seems like the work of a vet. Renegade just threw some punches together in a off-structured verse. Terumoto brought a "effortless" swag to the table, and he won in my eyes.

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