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Old 04-08-09, 11:49 AM   #1
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Fly-E vs JTR

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Check in by: 04-11-09 at 11:49 AM

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Old 04-09-09, 08:26 PM   #2
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son I know you see this battle, check in..........
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Old 04-09-09, 10:21 PM   #3
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Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-09 10:21 PM.
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Old 04-09-09, 10:32 PM   #4
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10,809 been oh here since 05
1 suggestion JTR...Get a life
I don't give a damn bought this battle or anything it takes
Cus i won't hesitate to expose this bitch as a fake
Your a weak fuck and i can't stand the shit that you type
because i can assume the shit that you'll say about bein fly
I aint neva been the one to bite and i aint been da type to complain
Fly is a metaphor so if you diss my name than you betta explain
This bitch right here is always bitchin about the feed and votes
Jus because you was 8-0 why you think you aint still at zero
Ya the heel kicks hurt and readin ya shit is even worse
Ya lyrics like a new birth and they instantly goin in a hurse
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Old 04-09-09, 10:34 PM   #5
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Quick Shit. I am glad you set battles up when niggas aint even want to battle on here no more but i still dropped so no hate.
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Old 04-11-09, 02:49 AM   #6
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Old 04-11-09, 03:18 AM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Fly-E
I am glad you set battles up when niggas aint even want to battle on here no more but i still dropped so no hate.


SHUT THE FUCK UP, we aint friends, I came here to fight you!
LOL @ no hate. Awwww, did you think I actually liked you?
NO!
And you don't get girls; you got the smallest dick
Bitches wouldn't dig ya if you was a dinosaur and they were archeoligists
And I got flawless chicks, you couldn't even have 'em for charge
But Fly-E does pick up girls
...over his head, then throws 'em in the back of his car
Tryna battle a star, you shouldn't be acting so hard
Cuz I can tell from your record what type of rapper you are
WACK!
Hahaha, see I wear fly clothes cuz i'm rich and ball hard
While Fly's clothes just consist of attire purchased from Wallmart
I'm bout to KO this chump, it aint my fault though...
When he cries like a lil bitch after a loss... like Cristiano Ronaldo
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Old 04-11-09, 03:39 AM   #8
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that shit was supposed to say "and you don't GET girls"

stupid typo

dont take my verse personally eh? That's just how I battle haha.

Good match man
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Old 04-26-09, 03:49 PM   #9
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SHUT THE FUCK UP, we aint friends, I came here to fight you!
LOL @ no hate. Awwww, did you think I actually liked you?
NO!
And you don't get girls; you got the smallest dick
Bitches wouldn't dig ya if you was a dinosaur and they were archeoligists
And I got flawless chicks, you couldn't even have 'em for charge
But Fly-E does pick up girls
...over his head, then throws 'em in the back of his car

Tryna battle a star, you shouldn't be acting so hard
Cuz I can tell from your record what type of rapper you are
WACK!
Hahaha, see I wear fly clothes cuz i'm rich and ball hard
While Fly's clothes just consist of attire purchased from Wallmart
I'm bout to KO this chump, it aint my fault though...
When he cries like a lil bitch after a loss... like Cristiano Ronaldo

i've seen you come way harder than this before.there were a few good punches.flow was always on point as it should be haha! highlighted your best punch.(actually made me laugh!)

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10,809 been oh here since 05
1 suggestion JTR...Get a life
I don't give a damn bought this battle or anything it takes
Cus i won't hesitate to expose this bitch as a fake
Your a weak fuck and i can't stand the shit that you type
because i can assume the shit that you'll say about bein fly
I aint neva been the one to bite and i aint been da type to complain
Fly is a metaphor so if you diss my name than you betta explain
This bitch right here is always bitchin about the feed and votes
Jus because you was 8-0 why you think you aint still at zero
Ya the heel kicks hurt and readin ya shit is even worse
Ya lyrics like a new birth and they instantly goin in a hurse

your flow in this battle is better than ive seen it before.the main downfall is the punch,try do abit more research into your opponents past.the rest will come with more battling.ive highlighted your best punch.

v/JTR
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Old 04-26-09, 09:18 PM   #10
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Voted For: JTR

ughh... Fly-E... too many explenation lines.. i was surprised, see the first bar you did was actually cool... thats the type of shit thats just a smart ass PUNCHLINE... <
JTR.. there was a few punches in your verse i didnt mind... a few that wernt anything special but you definatly did well enough to win this bout no doubt.....
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Old 05-01-09, 02:29 AM   #11
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Lol you got this one easy, i'm voting for JTR even if he hates me like a muh fucka, you had better punchlines...way better punchlines, this one made me laught:

Bitches wouldn't dig ya if you was a dinosaur and they were archeoligists

Lmao great one

Fly-E, just by reading your battle, we can tell that youre new to this

I dont feel like explaining my vote but JTR got this one easy
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Old 05-01-09, 03:51 AM   #12
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i dont hate you dawg lol, i dont care bout the internet enough to hate you, it's all in good fun, you're cool in my books, dont trip
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Old 05-04-09, 09:31 AM   #13
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jtr wins by ko

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