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02-11-05, 05:40 PM
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eph vs Whyte Ave. (MiddleWeight Championship)
IP: D5FE 7245
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Battles Go Up Monday (Only Friday this time, starting after this week will be Mondays) Check In Due Wednesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Friday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic : Why am i Here
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Most Recent Funniest Line "I dont go to malls cuz i dont like shoppin I cant buy clothes when the manikins are watchin" -Canibus Last edited by final : 02-12-05 at 10:09 AM. |
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02-12-05, 02:19 AM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
my name is eph now...cmon. check.
sorry, i just keep remembering it as verbal abuse lol...i changed it peace
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quote your own damn lyrics...
Last edited by final : 02-12-05 at 10:10 AM. |
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02-12-05, 04:25 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6FA7 7304
checkity check..
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02-18-05, 02:00 AM
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IP: 5867 FD83
Why Am I Here:
im gonna try something new, a multi verse contradicting RV. So lets talk about RV...... i do this for my own accord, knowledge opens doors. the words i form are not conformed, nor is they self absorbed. on RV my words are read & scored, judged and tourn. half the site says the text i drop, they already read before. which is why i dont do open mic, cause they just ignore... ...the fact, rap's a routine...not just some saturday morn'in chore. fuck undefeated records, fuck these rapverse Lords. respect and elevated rep, i dont write for either or. i look foward, to coming home with a topic & keyboard. knowing whats on my mind, is not wasted apon remorse. all those topics & dilemmas just await to be explored. but so many that have the gift, kick they pens to the floor. topical defined: an incidental moment, needing to be reborn. and so much more... but most of you just bicker back and forth. like preteen whores, the vets dont even battle no more. dicate from the sideline, cause they cant afford to ruin they scores. they duck so much, they got feathers sprouting from they pores. i cant be the only one reformed to the current rapverse norm. cant even sign in at school, in fear of them sigs with porn. its time we free the boards, by askin ourselves what we rappin for? Good Luck, Whyte Ave.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
Last edited by final : 02-18-05 at 02:54 PM. |
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02-18-05, 06:00 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6FA7 7304
A brand new day begins as the sun begins to rise
The rays, break through, and land upon my eyes Eyes wide shut; I softly smile, smelling the coffee brew I slide out of bed, looking outside, grass glistens with dew Hearing the crackle of bacon, I sit with my glass of milk After eating, I shower, where the water falls as soft as silk Spring flowers in full bloom, as the sun presses heat upon my face As I stroll lazily to school, enter the classroom and take my place On my desk lies a sheet of paper, with a question written down In thick black, it states “Why am I here,” and I start to look around The pens simultaneously scratch at the paper below I place the tip of my pen to the paper, but I do not know I stare blankly into space, thinking…Why am I here? I try and clear my mind, but any thoughts disappear What have I accomplished so far? I think in my head And nothing is comes and I've got nothing planned ahead I don’t hold a special place in the heart of someone I’m no quarterback turning pro, when school is done The bell rings, and I hand in my paper with three words written down I’ve etched “I Don’t Know” lightly and leave the class carrying a frown |
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02-18-05, 07:01 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 881A AF9B
both were good....liked ya concepts........
im not voting jus wanted to say good job
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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02-21-05, 03:44 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
same as what i said in the troop vs prem vs daz battle...its not gonna be a detailed verse cuz im tryin to get this finished but if more people were voting maybe it could of been a different turn out but im voting eph because of the way he took his topic...i like different concepts and eph had a more creative one...it hit people more because i know mad people know what eph is talkin about in this verse and it has a good overall moral to it, whyte ave you won the imagery aspect but it wasnt really enough to overpower ephs emotion and flow...you mainly described things in a good way and i liked it but just wasnt as good overall
no hate peace eph wins 1-0 at the end of voting eph +4 Whyte Ave. -2
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