Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 09:58 PM

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UnKnoWn-KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 09:59 PM.

CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 10:00 PM.

U better run, cus im beatin u witout breakin a sweat/
Ya 14th battle on RV, ill be sure not to make him forget/
Cus a one eight seven is about to be comitted/
I gotta explain to him how to battle, this kid just doesnt get it/
Your name is wack enough but what the fuck is with your avatar?/
It looks like Hannibal turned Transeves and got a boob jar/
But unfortunately like a phone bill I'll leave you torn and ripped/
I was born to win this battle as if God prewrote the script/
the outcomes not grey, u shoulda been a goose and ducked/
he from milwaukee, no wonder this kid just got bucked/

aight yo listen I'ma start by sayin u got aids and they full blown.
u at the end of the earth nobody knows ya thats why ur "unknown."
tryin to battle me is like goin up a hill with rollerskates thats steep.
I think its time to get out my broom and make this one a clean sweep.
Also u sayin u hard and comin up like so some magical "killa"
U real fluffy and soft and feathery just like a plump pilla(pillow)
U probably think that u superman on the streets go get your cape.
For u to get pussy u'd give $200 to the cheapest slut and yell out "rape"
It didn't take me long to put this down not even a second look
Only time u gettin close to somethin wet is when u layin in a brook
This ain't a tale about a man and all of his tribolous glory
In due time my rhyme will blind u like the Ray Charles story.

cmon dawg post ya verse dawg..............

uppin for votes.

oh yeah I don't know where u got that shit but I ain't from milwaukee

thats why its freestyle ~~!~~!~~

dont gota go from whree yea live

uppin ^^

cmon guys we uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: CODEE

give it 2 CODEE
had a nice flow pretty good structure
but not 2 hard of punches good enuff dough

Unknown
ur structure was tight n da flow but
work on wordplay n punches not just u
CODEE 2 ya had nice flow but it won't stand out
cuz u don't have those things so work on dat
nice battle

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Voted For: CODEE

this nigga had more ryhtm i was feelin it more pun. and more feel to his rhymes

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