deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.

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and what the fuck is a "Tweener"???

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Like a hardwood floor, this vet's easy to mop up, not posting a challenge in his rhymes..
Dust him off my nuts cause this dickriding bitch should join up with Dimez..
It's been a loong time, seems like PicturePerfect is finally coming back out the closet..
This time using nursery rhymes, he's hoping he'll finally be able to rock it..
Hang on, im comin back to the tables, n' rip sick spits n' fables..
I could merk Picture if i bolded, CAPITALIZED aND mAde myseLf loOk disabled..
what you call merderous hell, I turn to accel, so i kill days n' rip nights..
I told PP to spit just so new RB could see what a wack faggot spits like..
You Rely On Ya Crew's Votes...And You're last Battle Was Forced..
Trying To Be crazy...But Come Up Next To Nuts...Like Genital Worts..
I'm that type of beast to leave you deceased..or instead..
I'll expose you, 'cause you're just like yeast, you in-bred..

Blahh...stretched but who cares

check, have it up tomorrow if im sober

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check this bitch’s weak and stretched verses, yo I want a challenge
his rhymes need anti depressant medication cuz they imbalanced
shoulda took some time to write a new verse, shit, NWA already played it
he would of but time flys for this wackin off pervert, HE JUST TOO TITALATED
he so CRACKED OUT his weakness be LEAKING when he speak to me
you couldn’t roll over my verse if u were an actual GMC (gansta emcee) the car company
instead he transporting me to my win cuz he an actual FAIRY( boat, fag)
alone wit ya verse and some ky jelly is the only time its scary
like im in a crew wit 300 pound dykes its scary to FACE us (eat out)
cuz in ever battle I light up every competitor like the streets of Vegas
the fact that 12 lines we both went the max is the only time our verses match
cuz the votes I’ll snatch like snoops gin and juice track I just layed u back



(blow me if u don’t say I have muti’s)^^^ blow me twice if u say I don’t have WORDPLAY

rollin down the street smokin endo sippin on gin and juice, LAYED BACK, wit my mind on my money and my money on my mind. (LAST LINE) follow up

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flash - yah it was stretched...but a few punches were nice...this bar had me rollin...
Hang on, im comin back to the tables, n' rip sick spits n' fables..
I could merk Picture if i bolded, CAPITALIZED aND mAde myseLf loOk disabled..
that shit was funny...u had sum wit which is always good...flow was off alot...multis were nice...same with ya rhyme scheme...good punches for the most part...give it a 8.3/10

PP2 - u should just lose for explainin sum of that shit....flow was better...but not punchwise....u need sum personals...better meta's....multis are good if they add an effect to the punch...but urs dont...maybe 1 decent punch in there....that was this...
the fact that 12 lines we both went the max is the only time our verses match
keep elevatin...i give this a 5.2/10...

Vote - flash

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

reread my verse and come back wit some compliments fuckin chump, uppin.

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PP- your rhymes was elementary.......simple rhyme scheem in your verse....you need to elevate and come wit more witty and hard hitting punches.....i really wasnt feelin your punches that much.....and explain your votes is really old and played.....only thing you had going for you was your flow.......you tryed wit multis but they really didnt do anything for your punches......elevate

7.2/10


Flash-your verse was better....its good that you actually battling higher ranked people again.....your flow was really fucked and i wasnt feeling that at all.....your punches was better then his and they was witter.....your rhyme scheem was alot better then his aswell man.......you had some great multis aswell and they actually added to your punches and mad them hit harder....keep it up....good battle

8.7/10

flash wins for obvious reasons

PP- ya rhymes were to basic dont call ya self a vet on the real it was a elemantry rhyme the whole thing weak punches and weak personals I didnt enjoy it at all so your verses overall your verse was............................................... ..............
.................................................5 /10

Flash- It was iight wasnt the best ya know you had sine good personals and punches your strructure was bad saw some stretched lines your flow was okay and your verse was enjoyable your verses overall was a....8/10

vote: Flash

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A crip just like Bonecollector

opps looks like the kid KOed this "vet" uppin for 1 more vote

flash-your verse was pretty decent. Your flow and structure was a lil shaky though with some stretched lines. But i do think you had betta wordplay. YOu had alot of punches that really affected the opponent. You had some crucial personals as well. Expand and elevate on vocabulary and multis though.

PP-your verse was decent as well. I do think that your flow and structure was betta, but still it was a lil shaky. Punches were pretty good, but i think you should have had more personals in your verse. Ya wordplay wasnt that good either, elevate on your vocabulary and multis as well. Overall i think Flash had the betta verse because of more personals.

v/Flash

flash took this with harder wittier verse. Despite me thinkin ur a dick u did quite a decent verse......

I'm that type of beast to leave you deceased..or instead..
I'll expose you, 'cause you're just like yeast, you in-bred..

^i used a similar line but better but this was witty.

You Rely On Ya Crew's Votes...And You're last Battle Was Forced..
Trying To Be crazy...But Come Up Next To Nuts...Like Genital Worts..
again funny shit...

ima put that bred line in punch of the week.....for next mag

nice shit.....vote flash

this should be closed its a merking and i dont think that PP wants to be embarassed anymore then 5-0