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08-23-05, 05:06 AM
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The Paragraph President
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Rich Gurls (Remix) ft. Ltizzle
IP: D25C B392
www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05
Tizzle spits first, i spit second. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2386386 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2386390
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08-25-05, 12:12 AM
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Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
OK.....im feelin the beat lol...
Ltizzle... first off...quality isnt too great....i cant tell that you have potential right off the bat....your flow is on good at some points...but falls off in a couple...seems like your tryin to cram your words together in some points...gotta work on your pronunciation...delivery isnt too bad to start out with...but it needs some work....you mos def got potential man...no doubt.... Hook = Pure Dopeness LOL...i love it Para.... you kinda came in weird...almost seemed like you was talking....your quality is also not too good...but...your flow needs some work....make it flow more smoothly...sounds like your letting your words catch up to the beat some....your gotta good voice to be that young though...u can mos def work with that....delivery needs some work also.... you both have potential...it just comes with time...this was mos def worth the listen...keep it up and keep droppin
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08-25-05, 05:34 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 8C42 DC70
Send me this beat.............
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08-25-05, 11:18 PM
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IP: 9092 4066
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beat is nice, tizz ur flow is off and u keep havin to kinda get off beat to fit all ur words in.. i like the idea tho hook is dope.... Para, i'd never heard you before so i dunno what to compare it to, but you didnt seem to have any flow at all in this one.. no hate, but u could have worked on that and emotion... and well, your lyrics could have used some work too.... honest feed fams....
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