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Old 08-18-04, 02:14 PM   #1
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Full Of Threats

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you full of fuckin threats/
you full of matha fuckin regreats/
but when i cock back dawg you gonna be full of matha fuckin lead/
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Ima cock back cause you full of threats bitch/
my 12 gauge shottie will leave you chestless/
6 months i'll be off probation/
and i'll fill you up wit lead like an applacation/
the only thing you hearin is my gat/
and youll be layin on ya front step like a fuckin welcome mat/
i'll look at you while you layin on da ground/
ya body slumped wit ya brains blown out/
so sit there dawg i'll leave you in hell to rot/
cause you got hit more times then 50 got shot/
come on dawg nobody can handle dis/
nobody can get signed wit me nd my boy rich/
dawg every body wants to spit jus like i do/
but when da lead comes out da barrel its gonna hit you/
it will hit you all over until you dead/
in ya gut ya chest and in ya head/
yall cant spit stop tryin to act cool/
i'll leave ya six feat unda like a swimmin pool/
dawg dats why you dont want me to cock back and pull da trigga/
heres my boy rich p to show you wats up nigga/
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Old 08-18-04, 09:43 PM   #2
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good drop.......

you need to finish that shit tho......
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Old 08-21-04, 11:36 PM   #3
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good drop im glad to see you finished it..

it is much better now that you have finished it..
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Old 08-21-04, 11:44 PM   #4
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Good drop, but could have been better. I liked the flow and the vocab, but still both could have been stronger.
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Old 08-23-04, 03:08 PM   #5
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Yeoo

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Can i get some feedback.......................................... ..
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