dont call me sinner I'm a winner
you fool mad dog your just a beginner
talking trash about me you always doubt me
so i proudly murk you and ur in pain ouchy
u aint no mad dog your a puppy
think ur lucky bitch don't muck me
or have ur ass blasted and put in casket
ur an ugly bitch thats why ur a crack addict
guns blazing think ur amazing
u should be praying b4 u start decaying
all u do is moan and think ur on top
but ur an embaressement to hip hop.
u laughed at me on that track sinner bitch
but i beat ur ass hard i don't lose I'm a winner bitch

At least you can rhyme now...

Just everything else you need work with.

You should pick up a mic Sinner. Drop that on a beat. Really, I encourage you to...

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of course i can rhyme its simple and ive listened to a lot of rap music and I've learned. no hard feelings mate this is all in fun. showing some skills. god bless me.

remember its technique now.

Of course Sinner.

And I believe you should pick up a mic now... Really, do it.

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