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Old 12-03-06, 09:04 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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N. Tavarez (5-1) vs. Red Bull (5-1)

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This is the final week of the season! Last week was absolutely pathetic, but with what should be only serious contendors left, this week should be better. I've gotten rid of groups for the final week, you all can now battle it out for a better playoff seeding. Top 4 get a bye, top 12 get in, drop your best

Battler #1: Red Bull
Battler #2: N. Tavarez

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

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Old 12-07-06, 02:13 AM   #2
Diet Coke
 
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
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Old 12-07-06, 09:54 AM   #3
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 55F1 3980

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
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Old 12-08-06, 02:41 AM   #4
Diet Coke
 
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Quote:
Originally Posted by N.Tavarez
You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock


Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
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Old 12-08-06, 01:37 PM   #5
Spektikul
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From: Canada
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
This was actually okay, cept i think every concept to Tav aka hotshh's name has been used in some shape, way, or form in the past, therefore name play is kinda played out for him, not bad punch tho.

VS

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
Seemed like you tried harder to rhyme some multies rather than focusing on a punch, I was feelin the multies, dope as hell, cept wasnt feelin a hard punch in there

My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
This was def. original, good concept, wasnt really a hard punch either, but a funny concept no doubt on the wordplay.

VS

Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
lol! its kinda funny cause i thought the same thing about that bar of Tav's, but yeah, good flip concept of his bar, pretty funny too.

Well, your both my homies, and honestly in the punch department, i didnt really think either of you came hard this week. This is prolly because youve both been on RV for a long time and it makes it difficult to form new and fresh punches on members that have been here forever cause everything appears to be played out. With that in mind, I think you guys sorta did okay, but overall it was kind of a weak battle, little bit of comedy tho, but no hard punches or personals. I wasnt really feelin Tavs, cause like i said, seemed like you focused more on multies rather than wordplay. Then Tavs second bar was a cool concept but not a hard punch. Red on the other hand started with another Tav/Hot nameplay concept that was half-decient, anbd ended with a pretty alright flip on Tavs bar. So gunna have to go with you on this one mang. Props to both

V/Bull.............

P.S. What do you get when you cross Red Bull and Hotshh, together?

-Bullshit!!
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Old 12-08-06, 03:33 PM   #6
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 55F1 3980

yeah me and bull should merge and just be bullshh!
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Old 12-08-06, 06:05 PM   #7
King Solo
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
When you look at it, this isn't really that played. Most will focus on the fact that you used hotshh!/hot shit which is most definitely played.. but the main punch is focusing on the concept of him changing his name which to be honest, I don't think anyone has hit him with a punch like that. So overall this was pretty decent, simply worded, but decent.

VS

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
This was nice. I was feeling the multies which were fucking raw and the wordplay was pretty dope to. Its a simple generic like punchline with some nice wordplay and a kick ass multi flow going on.
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
Right, now the concept here is fucking dope. I haven't found a punch like this. You flipped it nicely and overall it came across as a nice, hard hitting punch.

VS

Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
These types of punches are becoming a common occurence, but they always fucking make me laugh. This was the best punch of the battle. It was a nice feed from Tav's first punch and it was worded well, executed well and overall just came across as fucking raw.


Yeah, personally I think that Reddy Bizzle won this battle. His first punch wasn't as played as it seemed to Spektizzle. It was a decent concept and the only downside to it was the wording was just too simple. Tav dropped a couple of nice bars, had some sick multies in the first bar and some raw wordplay. The second bar was nice to, an original concept and well executed punch. Bully just killed it in the end with a nice feed and a funny ass punch. Both can do better I know, but still this battle was nice.

VOTE: Red Bull

P.S. - What the fuck Spek, they been here so long so it is hard to come up with punches. Dude, I been here for almost 3 years, battled more than anyone, I drop like about 150 punches a fucking week. The reason behind lacking punches based on their own skill levels is LAZYITIS!!

P.P.S. - I'm not even signed into this league so my vote don't really count. MOTHERFUCKER!! That was a waste of ten FUCKING minutes. I could have jacked off in that time.
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Old 12-08-06, 11:25 PM   #8
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
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Quote:
Originally Posted by N.Tavarez
yeah me and bull should merge and just be bullshh!


LMAO, i know!!

...i thought it was a good idea anyways.

word.
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Old 12-09-06, 12:40 AM   #9
Te Ora
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
i liked this. if anything it isn't the harshest, 'cause u r saying he used to drop hot shit. but eh, it wouldn't work other wise so cool
Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
cool feed.


vs.


You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
i ono i think you over did the multi's. u didn't need "provoking shots" - sylabbel count is different to the "boast what you got / roasting ya drops / coach or a clock" one u had going on. wordplay was cool tho
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
haha. i liked this


shitttt.. this is close. the overdoing of the multi's in tav's first punch really didn't affect it much, and his second was my favourite of the battle. so i'ma have to edge this to him. cool battle though, you both came well.

v/ n.taverez
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Old 12-09-06, 11:07 PM   #10
Cola
Pushin it....
 
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
wasn't really feeling this bar..
Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
this was fucking lame, it gets old that you just make some really simplistic bar right after the other person drops 2 well thought bars...it just shows that you really couldn't do any better than his.

vs

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
this was going pretty well, but i really didn't see this as a personal diss....
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
hahahah, this won the battle...


NT's word play on his second bar is what took it...R/B came with the same consist blabble that everyone thinks is ill, yet is just simplistic as shit...

dont count this vote if you dont want to, but on the real...NT took this ...

vote: NT
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Old 12-10-06, 03:08 AM   #11
REMIS
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Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.
decent
Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.
okay, but coulda been better for a feed

vs

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock
str8
My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery
lol ight

pretty close battle here but i got n tav takin it by a hair or too, shit just appealed to me more..

vote - n tav
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Old 12-10-06, 11:59 AM   #13
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 2FB2 BF34

voted on four , gotta go
good shit bull
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Old 12-10-06, 01:04 PM   #14
Roger Glocks
Middle Weight
 
IP: 98BF 7183

red bull

Been here awhile, I've seen you drop hotshh!, it's true..
But just like the name, your text went along with it too.

^^ lol decent

Yo, show me what you know about flow and bout rhymes,
So I can throw down more multies...
......................................and sound whack all the time.

^^ aight decent

vs

You boast what you got? Im roasting ya drops, provoking shots
That'll send Red n Auerbach without da coach or a clock

^^coulda been dope...sound forced tho

My flows is hot, Im with your gale stoned she blow me w/ urgency
You with a gallstone......consists of doctor visits and surgery

^^ehh good idea...it's gallstoned then gallstone ...juss forced


n tav was creative here but punches were way to force...dope ideas but didn't like em..red bull had two decent punches and took this battle

vote-red bull
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Old 12-10-06, 08:40 PM   #15
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Word, good shit Tav..
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