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Old 12-25-06, 01:24 AM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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6. Spektikul (7-2) vs. 7. Te Ora (7-2)

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Final 4 baby! You all have earned your way to this spot. Your so close to the finals, don't fuck up now!

Battler #1: Te Ora
Battler #2: Spektikul

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

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Old 12-25-06, 03:03 AM   #2
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
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chickitty check check...
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Old 12-25-06, 04:07 AM   #3
Te Ora
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cheeeeeeeck in.
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Old 12-27-06, 12:08 AM   #4
Te Ora
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this week nick fletcher posted..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher on ghostwriting 4 dudes in the playoffs
lets just say the first time i did it was the first round and now that person has been beaten... but the other person is still in the playoffs...

i'll let you all figure it out


n last week red bull posted..



meaning spektikul has a history of letting dudes write lines for him
& only a few weeks ago spekktikul wrote like this..

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Originally Posted by Spektikul
The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..


but as of last week he writes like:

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^ Its true, you'll whopper ass.. this king has been a fool
'Coz how can I compete with a guy..
..who's been a Burger King employee since leavin' school
Ive researched your verses and discovered the truth, take a look
AJ Styles are like the wrestler.. second rate and wack as fuck


which is an oddly similar steez to nick fletchers:

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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher
i guess that's how you roll, ure tactics are exposed on set
and now i'm feelin' ripped off.. but without actually biting that concept
ure opinion means nothin, get set for a god-like drummin
'coz u told me Ahgod is trash..
.. so it must burn you 'coz a god impregnated ure woman




ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
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Old 12-27-06, 06:49 PM   #5
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
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Dude, its already been established that 2 of my drops were not written by me, thats it tho...i have no idea why you posted 2 other verses that i dropped, those are all me, plus you have no proof that it isnt. *cough, wack, cough*

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..

*Ora is the currency in Orania, but only they know of it because the South African Reserve bank wouldn't sanction the currency.

link - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ora_%28currency%29
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Old 12-27-06, 10:06 PM   #6
Te Ora
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lol..

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
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Old 12-28-06, 03:24 AM   #7
King Solo
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ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
This was decent, although without certain proof that I ghosted for him it doesn't come across as hard as it could be. It is more speculation than effective personal punch power.
.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
This wasn't as good as it could've been. The wording wasn't all that great and you basically focused on the same concept as the first bar, speculating on me ghosting for Spektikul, only with this bar you flipped it and focused on me no longer writing for him.

VS.

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
This was a decent feed. The wording could be better but this was nice, basically flipping the subject back on him and getting at him for trying the same shit Red Bull tried.
'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
The wording and structure of this punch wasn't all that great. The punch itself though was decent enough. It had an alright flow and the concept was a fresh nameplay. You get extra points for producing a fresh nameplay on a guy who's name is pretty played now.


Overall, this battle wasn't all too great. I think that Te Ora let himself down by focusing on the same concept for both of his bars. I thought the second one was better because it was a decent feed and a better flip. Still though, speculating on me ghosting for Spektikul made the punch lose power because I never actually stated who I ghosted for in this so any punch would be speculation. Spektikul seriously needs to work on his fucking wording and structuring of his punches because the unnecessary ............... is getting annoying. His punches were decent, the first being a nice feed and flip of a punch and the second being a fresh nameplay. I'm not a fan of explanations myself, but I feel that it was necessary for the punch so I'll allow it. I mean, don't even try and say that everyone knows where Orania is and what its currency is, let alone the fact that it isn't sanctioned. LMFAO!!

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Old 12-28-06, 10:44 AM   #8
Diet Coke
 
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You guys both fuckin' talk to much..

ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
This was dope, nice play.
.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
Nice wordplay, but using the same concept as the first punch was kinda weak.

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
Red Bull Shit lines are played on me, using on somebody else is outta the question.
'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
Way too stretched bro..


This battle sucked.

Vote: Ora, second punch was my favourite, would have been better if it wasn't the same concept as the first punch, but whatevs.. come harder in the finals or Tav will whore you.
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Old 12-28-06, 11:14 AM   #9
N.Tavarez
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ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
THIS IS EHHHISH T WITH THE QUOTES YOU FISHED UP YOU COULDVE MADE THIS MURDER
.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
THIS IS THE BETTER OF THE NICK THEM PUNCHES, GOOD ONE

VS


'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
THIS RIGHT HERE IS STRETCHED TO HELL. IT WOULDVE LOOKED BETTER SOMETHING LIKE THIS
'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT, ALSO I FEEL LIKE WHAT RED BULL SAID, IF WE NEED IT TO BE EXPLAINED TO US TO THE DEGREE

OVERAL I FEEL LIKE TE ORA WITH THE AMNO HE HAD COULDVE CAME HARDER'
AND SPEK DIDNT COME HARD ENOUGH, HE USED THAT ORA SHIT WHICH WAS STRETCHED AND TOO COMPLEX AND THE 1ST PUNCH WAS A RED BULL ONE WHICH ISNT FRESH NOWADAYS
HOPEFULLY WHEN YOU GUYS VOTE ON MINE YOU'LL BE AS IMPARTIAL AS I WAS
BUT
V/ TE ORA
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Old 12-30-06, 01:35 AM   #10
Roger Glocks
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ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them

^^ lol nice personal

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em

^^another nick punch...this one was good but crazy

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..

^^thats aight...feel the punch juss not hard like te ora's

................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..

^^aight little simple still aight

umm i like te ora's personals better...i wasn't feelin spek this round..te ora had the overwhelming personals to take this

vote-Te ora
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Old 12-30-06, 05:17 AM   #11
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both wuz good, but i liked speks mo. vote/spek -_- werd
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Old 12-30-06, 06:40 PM   #12
Cola
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how can spek even win?? when he was gettin people to ghost write for him?? isn't that called cheatin??? or BITING....i dont know tho...

vote- Ora....for not bittin
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Old 01-02-07, 05:56 PM   #13
Comedian
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Te Ora

ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
-----This was really nice.

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
----Seeing as it's only two punches, using the same concept was iffy. Still, really nicely executed.

vs.

Spektikul

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
-----Half-decent... still not much fire to it.

'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
-----In-tents/intense is horribly played. Overall, this was poorly worded and just doesn't hit.

I think Te Ora got this fairly easily.

Vote: Te Ora
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Old 01-02-07, 09:11 PM   #14
Cocaine
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Te Ora

ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
*** pretty nice punch, direct hit***

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
***same concept, but worded nicely, hits pretty hardy***


vs.

Spektikul

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
***decent, but doesnt really strike me as offensive***

'Ghost' stories are for camping suspense,
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
***i see where u were going, just didnt come out right, decent attempt***


vote Te Ora

good battle
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Old 01-03-07, 12:55 AM   #15
DaTrusHurtz
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ur not the lowest of the low. but u must be a bitch when
ur not stealing ur lines.. but u certainly nick'd them
proof is solid here to make this believable.. decent punch

vs.

We got a lot in common, cept ure too late, they already exposed it..
Concepts been used, U got nothin on me, Just the same old red bull-shit..
decent comeback, but don't think this was as good as the original.. i dunno, somethin' about it was a bit off
................if u wrote your last bar there it still wouldnt be in-tents..
Aint no one banking on Ora, cause even they wont sanction him or his cents..
nah, this came off kinda played and weak

vs.

.. it's obvious ur no longer ghosted. but let's not move on to fickle fighting
dudes had banked on ur lines goin far.. but only when nickle write 'em
this was dope.. it was hard hitting from a feeding standpoint and hard hitting from a personal standpoint

I don't like that Te Ora used the same concept for both bars, but his last bar alone took this battle.

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