it’d be a poster to me, but some bitched “its all over the street!”
kid plugged into his creative outlet ‘n shocked both the extremes//
pussy politicians would push for prison…probably 20 years flat
to penalize a picture perfect paintin the public paused to peer at?//
‘its pollution!’ parlor moms pose arguments, just to harp ‘n mock
‘n then pitch their partially-smoked parliaments in the parkin-lot//
he aint purposely persuade packs of people to the particular game
they just found a wall, ‘n like an alliteration, all started the same//
pummeled with persecution…the painters were going thru a test
they were in their right mind, but most people only use their left//
so everything the artists posted was attacked ‘n called into focus
whats poetic justice? before the graffiti the walls went unnoticed//
media told the masses: its peer pressure parents, scold their asses
they’d follow him off a bridge, the day he starts taggin overpasses//
how trend setting was he? some people were swept off their feet!
he didnt just paint the town red… he painted it ready to read//
cuz dammit it wasnt damage! why’d anyone brand him a bandit?
he could manage to see an artistic side on the back of a canvass//
he cant even admit he did this, gets dismissed like sun-shines are
making a painting he cant claim, like a gift with an unsigned card//
to this day hes a name that isnt reppin a face, but u bet its okay
…its easier to see someone’s soul without their flesh in the way//
so the poet in him’ll keep going forever, and hopes eternities late
even though his intellectual property doesnt have a security gate//

this story’s not false… but i can easily explain how i planned it
this board was the wall, i was the he, and the name was dynamic//
vet to sensation, i wrote in present tense durin my text elevation
so my every piece would be an easy read for the next generation//
my shit’ll live- in the future read one or two spits, it’ll prove this
cuz behind the new shit theres always a blue print on how to do it//
someday a cat’ll say my ideas are old…he wasnt there at the start
‘n if he went backwards, what he calls an artifact was in fact a art//
some tried to copy my paintings, i wont say vengeance is sweet
but the most important prints they traced, were left with my feet//
we’re all graffiti artists! wit a made-up name to decoy a real sense
and with a creativity that’s priceless to the point you feel spent//
i’ll be gone by day break, if im remembered i got ya’ll to thank
the name was nasdaq,
…will it paint a picture or will you draw a blank?

....thanks for reading....

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I simply love it! Both part 1 and part 2...Was def feeling your flow, vocab was straight fire...but that wordplay! Damn...dope! Whoa man...that last verse where you "explained" everything...

we’re all graffiti artists! wit a made-up name to decoy a real sense
and with a creativity that’s priceless to the point you feel spent

^oh so true...

One of the best things i've read here so far...it was long but worth the read! This stuff came straight from the heart...H-O-T

DQ, number 1 fan hehe...

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Dope, Dawg.......... Its Eyvon, By The Way.... Keep Up Ya Writing... U Do Really Good Poetry

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

Ha My Nikka ............shit Was Good..............up Ya Vocab Though

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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

once again...hotness cutty. just hotness.

...the super...

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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

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Keepin it Gutta!!!

whoa im geting some fanss...thanks for the love

uppin for some feed back

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i want some feedback
^^uppin uppin^^

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uppin motha fuckaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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this was str8 hottness fam....good flow.....theres one word to say to this piece STR8 HOTNESS FAM


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put down an feedback in my open mic


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ok i will drop some feedback after school peace

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This was one of the best I have EVER read. I really liked these lines^^

Dawg you gotta write more its definitely worth reading.

ya thanks for the feedback!

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yupp pretty dope.. 8/10 post feed on mine.. color of love.. its a poem just posted in OM for more feed..

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