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12-10-06, 07:44 AM | #1 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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NEW ****PRAH'JECT - STARS (this is real right here)!!!! *****
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AYO so y'all want me to spit something real..yall didnt know I did this shit ya dig..but heres one of the many real tracks on the mixtape..it's called stars produced by RV's own JD..whaddup kid!..holla at me..1
www.soundclick.com/dollaback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238092 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238093
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12-10-06, 08:20 AM | #2 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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the track really is different
u sound real flow is nice like always overal nice track |
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12-10-06, 10:00 AM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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12-10-06, 02:29 PM | #4 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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.............. dotn get yourself banned again
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12-10-06, 03:32 PM | #5 | |||||
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yoooo ripped that beat mann!, likin' this a lot, emotions real nice on it, delivery and flow are sickkk, yeerr real nice track mannn..keep up the good work
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12-10-06, 08:41 PM | #6 | ||||
I don't lose
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you sound a lil too up on the beat.....like tense i think it is....it would be alot better with a more laid back flow...the hook needs to be mixed again....like you didnt do good with the hook, the dub is too loud takes away from the flow....some things could be upped on production here. n the way you approached the song, but the lyics n flow was straight.....rtf on "fly away"
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12-10-06, 11:37 PM | #7 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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listening now
The beat is raw so far the quality is really good im def. diggin the concept of the track WOW this beat is really hot :O but the flow is good......lyrics are tight to.....i just think you should have changed ur emotion up in some spots...but this is def. a nice lil track sounds like a good album track Best song i heard in a while from you..glad u came real on this |
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12-11-06, 05:15 AM | #8 | ||||
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apreciare that..ay 286 u stop likin the shit since i left oyd lol but ay thanks yall n i fele u jay
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12-11-06, 08:06 AM | #9 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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i like this beat! your flow is steady and ur rhyme scheme too...i'm liking it! your delivery is better than the usual on this...and i think your emotion is just in point! i'm liking the lyrics too...hook sounds gd except that u panned it to the right too much! yeah u ripped this...i enjoyed it pretty much! keep doing your thang...i'm a fan so keep 'em coming!
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12-11-06, 08:23 AM | #10 | ||||||
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12-11-06, 09:44 AM | #11 | |||||
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glad everyones likin the beat, I DID THAT SHIT!! LOL
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12-11-06, 12:11 PM | #12 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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^^yup yup......that's whatsup
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12-11-06, 12:42 PM | #13 | ||||
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The beat is amazing
Like I told you on aim The first verse is hard. I was feeling the "izzers" ya dig? The hook is fire too, its just missing something, I dont know. But its still good. The 2nd verse is great aswell, nice way to end the track. I was feeling the 1st verse more though. This is a very good song, man. You get ALOOOOT of props on this. This shows you are very versatile in rap. Real Talk.
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12-11-06, 12:42 PM | #14 | ||||
I don't lose
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you left oyd? when did that happen? man im out of the loop
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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12-11-06, 12:47 PM | #15 | |||
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yeh JD reppin UK with this beat nice work fam
im feelin the flow on this i like how you had a different flow on the first verse...lyrically it sounds like you put a lot of thought into this...you fell into the feel of the beat real well which is important as it makes it sound like a complete piece of work...that would make a nice album track fam ~peace~ |
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