aaight spit ya shit first.........



all votes must be explaind goodyou know tha rules..





G'Luck

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Checkin' in... Good luck, lyriclesolja. Go back to the bitchslapped thread before this.

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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

i know i checked it Blind Spit...

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Due in 20 minutes. Ready? Go!!!

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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Aight, check it...
Here I go, I'm here prepared to drop lava fire on this dumbass
Wantin' to battle, he probably figured that he could win this fast
This Soulja couldn't bring a real battle if his sperm depended on it
It probably don't matter much to him, cause his dick is nonexistent
I gotta tell ya, dawg, you have no rhmin' future here on RB.com
But lotsa niggas wanna be my cheerleader, go grab your pom-poms
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I got tension built up, lyriclesoulja just put himself in da line of fire
U okay, but this battle's like MJ in his prime 1 on 1 with Stoudamire
I'd say that you could win some on RB, but I won't be called a liar
In dis thread, u could post 100 uppin's, but my rhymes'll still be higher
You could throw ur weak punches all day, but they wouldn't faze me
I'll break ur jaw from a mile away, thru broken teeth u'll say "Amazing"
I come with my lyrical earthquake, blow ur ass of da ricter scale
Sign on to AOL after this, they'll say "Ur Bitch Ass Got Hate Mail"
Ur hangin' on to this forum by this one thread, u might as well let go
Cause once DarkLight gets on to RB I can't help but steal da show
Later

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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Yo homie needs to check himself out of tha dark light,
and check himself into my hotel and die tryina stay fo da night,
im in tha dark places waitin to slit ya throught wit a steak knife,
go skitz then commit suicide,
then come back like a ghost from a past death,
im too out of his league like Durst tryina spit wit "meth",
the only dopeness he gonna feel is when he touches tha screen,
and looses his "breath" tryina not to believe,
not even CPR can save this wack mcee,
cause the only green you stackin,
is when you go to you granma's house and start weed wackin.

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Ooops, I dropped 16. You don't care, though, right? I know you're a real man, not like some other herbs around here.

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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

lol thats some funnie shit dog cause that the first thing i did when i saw your verse was count tha lines....na its all good i couldent care less....


Peayce

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DARK:
This Soulja couldn't bring a real battle if his sperm depended on it
It probably don't matter much to him, cause his dick is nonexistent(3/10)

DIDN'T MAKE NE CENTS^

I gotta tell ya, dawg, you have no rhmin' future here on RB.com
But lotsa niggas wanna be my cheerleader, go grab your pom-poms6/10

FUNNY^

UR BEST LINE I THINK
In dis thread, u could post 100 uppin's, but my rhymes'll still be higher7/10

UR STRUCTURE WAS AIGHT. YA PUNCHES AIGHT. SIMILES SLACKIN A LIL BIT. AND URS WAS MORE INTRESTIN' TO READ. NE WAYZ U STILL GOT MY VOTE


Lyriclesolja: ITS SOUNDS LIKE U WERE WRITIN POETRY MAN. U STRUCTURE WAS HORRENDOUS. URS WAS WAS BORING AS HELL TO READ. ELEVATE UR GAME PIMPIN'. AND PLUS IT LOOKS LIKE U JUST STARTED ON R.B. I WAS N'T JUS FEELIN IT. U LEFT UR GLOVES HOME ON DIS BATTLE YO. NO PUNCHES I SEEN THROWN HERE.

MY V/ DARK

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ok both were weak but Lyric takes this for a better verse and hitting the line limit..
Darklight opener was bad..

Peep this and ill poll my vote..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131971
thanx and.. pz.

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sup, darklight, ya opener could be better but u ripped some aiight lines after that, the uppins line was hot, the AOL line was hot, the broken teeth line was aiight.

lyricle solja, your opener ripped it on darklight's, the commit suicide wasnt really part of any bar so it didnt work that well, the fred durst line was some good shit, ya finisher was weak tho, but still a pretty tight verse for the amount of time u had to rite it.

my vote has to go to darklight tho, i was just feelin his verse a lil more.

vote- darklight

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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Uppin for votes..

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Uppin for votes..

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