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05-06-05, 06:01 PM | #1 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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LFS the Great
*Talking* Haha...we all got obseesions....we made a son...sing-along...please...this is an OG Production by the way..all of us...get ready for a LONG track lol Hook: (every line is spoken in one breath) A Half Dozen of Dastardly Delights and Fiendish Fetishs with a hint of Uncontrollable Desire for Assorted Trickets and Objects, *breath* To be spoken upon only with utmost respect or we will be forced to stomp your face while indulging in obsession's effects.... Hells Fire obsession led to rapverse intangible tangle my words succession of mental words interchangleable with verbs every night a log on u got mail maybe a private message Every twenty four hours i thread topically a story blessage textually tryin to up my game to par and drop the bogey turned it from the rap game to a star picture of the prognosee adjectives and words differ from the laxitives to words subjectives and herbs shiver from the vets to suburbs people type life without gossip and learn not to jock it he who write life contort visual messages from the pocket puttin knowledge to paper and paper to homedge writeing straight dopeage and not need straightedge writers block only makes me break bricks harder going from concrete to gravel since hood starter im obsessed too many hours to write too many pieces to cite im obsessed too many hours a night too many ways to knife typing like mental messages of war leavin brains on scar shrapnel left dental blessage of tar leaving stains on bar i feel i need to keep coming here for the ellivation and talkin about suffering to kids with the relivation movin at night seemin cinco-patient(5am) to sinquopation my cd about to drop home ward bound life is found because even in this obsession the light may be found cuz its not gambling if ya win, not eatin if ya thin not teethin if ya chin, not swearin not a sin if no wrong is done, no ones kill whats the harm so ima keep this obsession till i cant feel my arm ~Hook~ l i n e Aiyo, that’s really nice man, but im obsessive over a bastard Parents gave birth before marriage, so what if she’s a hamster? My brother embraced her... Felt sorry ‘cause she was blind So I shoved some marbles up her ass to give her cats eyes I surprised the veterinarian when he confronted her problems He called me a sick fuck………then tossed me some condoms My love life’s hittin’ rock bottom, writing love letters to animals I whip snap her ass, getting her into gear like she mechanical Made her fanatical, by ejaculating into her water dish But when the droplets hit her lips, she suspected my affair with a fish.. So I left the bitch and obsessed about something ever so sexy …………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦.Take it Kesse!, Kesse all you people bragging bout how you love something material well its different for me, i like to go on about my cereal lets be real, eat raisin bran, you get greatness in two scoops all you have to do is follow your nose and enjoy some fruit loops just eat some alphabits, and you can learn while at home you want something that gives you a real buzz? try some honeycomb and dont overlook the classics like cheeri-o's or corn flakes take it from that lovable tiger, frosted flakes...they're grrrrrreat even if its late, hit up a bowl with some milk and start to munch how bout some golden grahms, wheaties, or even some capn' crunch or the cinnamon toast kind, maybe rice crispies and start with a snap crackle with corn pops, remember flinstones pebbles and apple jacks? i dont care what they say, im not a kid but i still like my trix and i still have fun making chocolate milk when i stir up my nesquik i cant get enough of that sugar crisp, id make a spoon outta my arm screw campfires, i get my marshmellows from chocula and lucky charms you wanna come in here with your maturity, saying cereal is old but i say fuck all the rest of you... i live my life by the bowl ~Hook~ D523 Fuck the work, vaseline if u know what i mean is where its at Jerkin off in class while admiring the substitutates ass Cum, pouring out like some sort of a sloping trough WAIT? WHAT THE FUCK? MY HAND WONT COME OFF Crazy glue? what the fuck? WHO DID THIS? I fuckin hate you! People callin me smurf cuz lack of bloodflow makin my dick turn blue Sweat beads beads building up, fuckit i dun had enough Took the teachers scissors and i cut the fucking thing up Couldn't take it, stress level at a supreme Woah ? what ? i woke up and this OM was all a dream LFS The Great & One Step Beyond Baked good.... God damn... I'm gonna savor this bite... Love at first sight, mouth waters and I stare in delight, The flavor is like blueberrys... but don't stereo type, More flavors... But one muffin could be savin my life, Taking my knife, indulgin in greatness ,champion of sweets, Lovin my Little Debbies , muffin's are common man's treats, Cupcakes? CUPCAKES?!?!?! I guess ima common man in the past, But cupcakes? that what you yell when a guys rammin your ass, Rammin ass HA yall know best ,shit yall simply bread thats sweet, Yall is soft, that's why you never see The Muffin Man in the streets, You're a poser, snatch the real one cupcake man, took his stuff and ran, The problem is, lets be honest, do you know the muffin man? Muffin Man, he's joke I plan to put him on the corner of Drury Lane, And throw cupcakes at his assistants and re-frost their jugular veins, you're fuckin insane! i killed mrs. debbie and ain't had drama since, Muffins are the common mans treats, at least i don't lack common sense, Stop thinkin past tense cuz cupcakes are supreme to the finish, Cuz the only place yall are Kings is the home to the British, I'm questioning your thoughts... for real this homie is different, Cupcakes taste like ass... actually more like dead ponys and spinach, At least our mascot girl didnt spaz, screamin like she's in pain, The muffins have made him go insane, and not just the main brain, fuck a cupcake... but let me ask you this... why is your game lame? is it cause your favorite food and boyfriend go by the same name, Maybe it's cuz I'm wit the enemy cuz I'ma callin wifey my muffin, And when I'm thru she'll see it's more than cupcakes I'm stuffin, ~Hook~ LFS The Great (talking) Haha...we all got issues...we retarded for this shit haha..damn this took long to type...haha...fuck it...where did everyone go???
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05-06-05, 06:11 PM | #2 | |||||
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yeah, this was the shit...hells fire actually wrote a pretty intense verse....lol, for such a half-assed OM
lmlo......anways, dont ever call my crew retarded...we are optimistically genius, nah sayin, anyways, this was dope cause i was in it.... mmm, mmm, cant get enough of kesse
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05-06-05, 06:19 PM | #3 | |||||
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Uh Oh Not These long Crew names again .............Nice drop
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05-06-05, 07:17 PM | #4 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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wow 16 views...3 replies...nice...uppin
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05-06-05, 08:35 PM | #5 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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*applaudes*
gooooood shit OG...was feelin everythang...shit was sumthin i couldnt stop reading...dopeness...8/10...return tha fava (ALL YALL) in any of my OMz...links in sig...stay up yall...1
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05-06-05, 08:47 PM | #6 | ||||
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This was an iight open mic,
Could have been alot better.. but it was decent Structure from both was good , Try to match up your bars and not have some bars stretched... Hell fires verse was iight , Some bars were filllers.. Kesse's verse was tight , ha you had some dope punchlines.. Nice creativity.. and nice wordplay and vocab , overall it was a decent peice.. could have been alot better... Needs improvement in wordening your bars, and not having as much fillers ... keep it up and drop a link or this will be closed
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05-06-05, 08:52 PM | #7 | |||||
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been a while sinced i OM'd lol...here ya go
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189128
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05-06-05, 08:55 PM | #8 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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peep my OM LFS..."Gettin Attention"...its hot fam
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05-06-05, 08:58 PM | #9 | |||||
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i got yu fam...uppin this OM
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05-06-05, 11:17 PM | #10 | ||||||
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haha, yo yo, you like that or what, lmlo anyways, yeh, this was pretty fun though, i laughed so hard at line's....uppin
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05-06-05, 11:49 PM | #11 | ||||
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:: bump :: leave some feed on this yall!
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05-06-05, 11:49 PM | #12 | ||||
Sam Dope
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Dopest shit ever...10000000000000000000000000000009/10 bitches...Weerd
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05-06-05, 11:57 PM | #13 | ||||
Light Weight
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thanks for feed!!!! :: bump :: again
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05-07-05, 11:04 AM | #14 | ||||
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uppin this dopppppppppe om for some feed
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05-07-05, 07:51 PM | #15 | |||||
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uppin...this took forever to edit wit the colors and shit...my verse wit OSB was killer...LEAVE FEED FOR MY LABORS! lol
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