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06-28-06, 02:08 AM | #1 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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Wake Up Blind feat. Bella
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replied to Q and Spul
sum chilled shit, topical bout how ppl nt look at what happens around em,day 2 day Original Digital Movement production, produced andmixed by D.M Track features Bella on hook and random children for adlibs LOL www.myspace.com/acuitymusic top track, enjoy the_daddy2k4@hotmail.com<-- msn, 4 graphics , beats n collabs or jus 2 holla
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06-28-06, 03:51 AM | #2 | |||||||||
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beats nice i listened to this without the hooks...ya flows a lot more cleaned up lyrics are straight...hook was cool...vocals on bella were sweet...real soothing...fitted the beat well... elevation is apparant...keep droppin
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06-28-06, 06:14 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Listenin'..yeah Im feelin the accent and you have a decent rhyme scheme which is unique to you..an flow is working...bella chick is a good singer..2nd verse didnt start that strong but got better...and emotion is real nice too..I like the echo's on the last words of your verse and this song is pretty proffesional nah mean...lyrically this is nice, nothin like wow but its definitely apparent u spend time..1
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06-28-06, 01:34 PM | #4 | |||||
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thanks4 the feed
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06-29-06, 04:41 AM | #5 | |||||
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IP: EAC7 A666
up...............
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06-29-06, 03:30 PM | #6 | ||||
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dope!
real nice Ac beat is real nice, relaxing I like it, lyrics and flow are nice and the hooks dope, bella got a nice voice, you've really really elevated since last time I heard ya...lol left me behind kid :-) im back now though so im drop somethin soon so if you could leave feedback wen ya see it i'd appreciate it. real nice track, goin on the ipod
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06-30-06, 03:16 PM | #7 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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thanks prem.......
blaaaap
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07-01-06, 01:04 AM | #8 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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"people only into themselves like a prime number"- dope line... i like the concept for this song... good shit and really good mixin and everything all sounds on point... word good drop fam.. return wit some feed..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230858
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07-01-06, 02:20 AM | #9 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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i like the intro...........the kid talkin was cool Your flow is nice....ur quality sounds professional.......lyrics are good.....pressense is good....everythings cleans on the verse sept a lil bit better emotion and it would be dope...the beat is dope.........i like the concept of this track...good lines......good shit on her vocals......shit was dope |
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07-02-06, 12:39 PM | #10 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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lol, @ intro...sick man.....damn ..beats HARD.....quality is nice....this is pretty ill man....flow n delevery r nice....hard to understand the aaccent but...idk usualy it bothers me, that was smooth enough to nod a head to tho IMO...hooks ill.....u come in on the 2nd real nice man...this shits has a real sleek sound..prime number line was ill...big ups to big L man....tight shit bro...delevery comes off bad ass here...solution line was nice, good writing....like the beat drop their...nice shit man....
keep dropping bro *the truth*
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