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Old 08-02-05, 12:27 PM   #1
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Lightbulb The Meaning of the Music/Drakel*OSB Productions

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as i swell up with wisdom, im devloping visions
striving beyond hell with a rebellious ambition
cant sell us tradition, im impelling with rhythm
taking whats given, and excelling every decision
a musicians nutrition, feeds off lifes actions entwined
and my compassion for rhymes seeds from the passion of time
just imagine the has beens, i take action and harness this fame
using my views for the music, i'll never tarnish the game
target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields
my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield
i handle the real, you think i'd have heaps of enemies
but im the surreal ideal, cause im at peace with the melody
dont tell me to keep trying, go back in the hole you crawled through
cant hear what im saying? well i'll just pump up the volume
my lyrics will go the distance, my pesistence insists it
cause the music fills me with more life than the start of existence


mind rises from the clutter, filled with thoughts of music
this angelic state isn't luck... music brought me to it
brace through it all, resist the fall, and climb above
Through the clouds, peace rains down from a flying dove
the rhythm transforms my soul, my thoughts grow wings
we've stormed our goal... through this atlering fall to spring
my hands begin to sing, fluid movements create life
soothing... at the same time our truth is choosing to save lives
so i take my decisions, applying skill and precision
Bringin the vision of true hip hop.. to the willing its given
filling ideals with rainbows, living days full of confidence
day dreams may seem surreal, but the real thing is obvious
and as we continue to grow, my words blossom farther
through venues with snow... through drops of water
passed to sons and daughters, the meaning never crumbles
our poetry is honored.... sending tingles, tensing muscles


Try and apply this sunshine but July is cloudy,
Though I stay flying as high as the skies allow me,
Liking the vibe, showing how much heart does it take,
To catch a glimpse of Elysium and a sparkling lake,
Marketing this? Nah... I'm just harnessing fate,
My writing arm doesn't break when i'm arcing my fist,
Dreams chasing me, when my presence starts to exist,
Just an untold story of the shark and the fish,
Fate lyes in the hands of only those who grasp it,
Passion burning like a phoenix, I rose from ashes,
Rocking the landscape as soon as the boulder crashes,
Lose the flame? I'm everlasting when i'm holdin matches,
A mosaic? Nah, my lyrics are in appropriate places,
Its nature to me, spanning from the coast to the acres,
Potions with vapors, floating up, misting, beleive,
An ocean of haters, and were just the little fish in the sea...

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Old 08-02-05, 12:32 PM   #2
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fuck yeah!

Fate lyes in the hands of only those who grasp it,
Passion burning like a phoenix, I rose from ashes

^im high when im flying, X WING FIGHTERS
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Old 08-02-05, 12:35 PM   #3
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i like it a little
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Old 08-02-05, 12:48 PM   #4
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this was a nice drop....you both had the flow on point and i loved the creativity and the kinda deepness of this drop......vocab was real nice...i liked the second verse where both of you each worte a line and then linked it.....overall good drop 7/10
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Old 08-02-05, 06:06 PM   #5
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word............

word?
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Old 08-02-05, 06:30 PM   #6
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wow......this had emotinon like a mother


flow was like roses......man this was good

9/10,,,from me...keep it up
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Old 08-02-05, 06:48 PM   #7
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Nothing Here But Poetry Heads Man In Rap This Would Be Straight Garbage For Real Yo But How Did So Many Poetry Jockeys Get On One Place Doe No Attitude All Soft Jelly Junk I Got To Read No Rapper In Their Right Mind Would Waste Time With This Right Here
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.........you suck homie...deal with it.........and my open mic was'nt poetry
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Old 08-02-05, 07:49 PM   #9
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Nothing Here But Poetry Heads Man In Rap This Would Be Straight Garbage For Real Yo But How Did So Many Poetry Jockeys Get On One Place Doe No Attitude All Soft Jelly Junk I Got To Read No Rapper In Their Right Mind Would Waste Time With This Right Here


hmm, well since i've seen your shit before, im not really offended

go listen to some 50 cent or something, and dont waste my time.
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Old 08-03-05, 12:59 AM   #10
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liked this, flow was good, emotion was good, imagery was ok, vocab was good, both did a good job, keep it up
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Old 08-03-05, 02:11 AM   #11
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Hey with this garbage you can’t be sliding in lace
Bitch find a hiding place to have you residing is a disgrace
Being soft like melon is a boss felon you under arrest
Got your plan buffed with handcuffs why blunder mess?
Rhymes all poetry rap won’t have you slap your face punk
Then grab your crew
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Old 08-03-05, 02:13 AM   #12
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^^^^^^^^^^^i dont get it
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Old 08-03-05, 02:17 AM   #13
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he sux don't worry bout him....
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You Just Got Merked You Stupid Fuck Now Do You Get It?
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Old 08-03-05, 02:19 AM   #15
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fuck u man i wasnt startin beef bitch damn
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