3 hearts..

a woman whom loves. a man whom is loved
a love that can not be.. a love that is not this
a sin wich can not be spoken, shame upon words
the scent of lust stains the air.. twas more than a kiss.

two hearts whom love compassionately
two hearts whom he can not love with his own
a dying love turned to lust. a rising love destroyed
a man who wants not be lonely.. but to be alone.

his choice is not to be taken with the light of heart
his words can kill.. he must speak soft and slow
his heart will love only one.. the other love must die
and no one can tell me why..


it has meaning to me so i dont expect you to understand it

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lemme get some feed kids.

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people who dont post feed are losers.

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this was pretty dope, i feel like i understood it completely...i liked your verbiage...your word choice was illmatic...im def impressed with this....i don't think i know who you are..but even the best writers on this site seem to have a petty grasp of what poetry is about...i don't feel that way with you, you seemed to contain elements of poetry to call it structured, and didn't sacrafice much, if anything at all to do it...very well done...please leave feedback on my poem called ..."my nigga"

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...673350#poststop


2 fingers
1 love

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

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