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05-07-08, 12:39 AM
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"L.A. Dreaming"......1st Open Mic
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Verse 1 Yo -I'm L.A. dream'n on the beat when I speak about my residence- -I was dream'n of Compton when Eric. B ran for President- -Used to be a Nigga Wit a Attitude back in '88- -Now niggas is trade'n in they Chucks for a pair of BAPES- -But it was Cali on my mind, I guess I was Nas in his prime- -'Cuz my 'L.A. State of Mind' kept me on my grind- -Any way you slice it I had it doper than Nino.....- -.....Brown nose'n up to me i'll have you smoked like a Casino- -Fog everywhere I look, bad traffic, and sticky green- -California license plates just so I can rep my team- -But dont get it twisted........its not alotta of hate- -I'm just clarifying who's real so you dont have to deliberate- -You might as well exaunerate........me from candidacy- -'Cuz I dont run wit you cats, just check my history- -You niggas are a mystery..........I dont understand the logic- -'Cuz this is not the draft, dude you can't dodge it- |
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05-07-08, 12:40 AM
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05-07-08, 05:06 AM
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Whys That?
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IP:
This is nice bro, I like the gentle word play in it, aswell as the real talk in the drop. Rhymes are decent, could be a few mor emutlis in it, bu tthey decent enough. Would of liked it to be a bi tlonger seen as I was enjoying the read.
Stay dropping that heat bro. |
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05-07-08, 05:49 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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Pretty decent for a verse, but im not one to speak on the verses written unless its me giving feed on a audio, but props on the drop
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05-08-08, 03:54 PM
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Thanks for the feed yo.......uppin.......
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05-08-08, 10:58 PM
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Addicted
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IP:
good word play, felt more real than creative could have been a little longer,overall good read....7/10
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05-08-08, 11:57 PM
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IP:
Uppin..............
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08-03-08, 10:22 PM
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New to RV
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Uppin..........
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