RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Back Stage > Concluded Tournaments > Linguistic Expressions
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 05-06-06, 05:48 AM   #1
DQ
Odi et Amo
 
DQ's Avatar
 
From: Alosta City
Zais vs. vafinest

IP: C966 3CBF


Rules: READ FIRST


Topics: make your choice


You and your opponent do NOT have to agree on the topic...


Pieces are DUE Thursday May 11

Voting ENDS Saturday May 13


Minimum line limit: 20

Maximum line limit: 50 (you can do more if your opponent agrees)


Good luck!
__________________


Authentik Intelligence





...The future is mine...

Send a message via AIM to DQ Send a message via MSN to DQ Send a message via Yahoo to DQ  
Old 05-07-06, 01:39 PM   #2
Zais
New to RV
 
IP: F264 E971

if he dont show just make sure I get my win
 
Old 05-07-06, 03:17 PM   #3
vafinest
New to RV
 
From: in my mind
IP: 3240 794D

check topic I'm writing to:Sacrifice
__________________
Back In Action
 
Old 05-11-06, 06:42 PM   #4
Zais
New to RV
 
IP: F264 E971

Gone

pain in tears agony woven into a tapestry
drowning in fears swimming in joy's memory
kisses on cheeks flash before eyes so weary
hugs and laughs flee from me leaving me empty
walks on paths leading no where
into a pit of darkness I stare
the future whispers back tales of sorrow
yet to come as I find it hard to swallow
my feelings say's to run
my body stays in place hands over my face
this can not be the case sweetness left without a trace
so many words left unspoken
so many promises left broken
move my lips to speak to the wind but my words go no where
my vibrations are to weak to reach an ear let alone one that cares
alone in the world bound by time and emotion
her and me nothing but love and emotion
prays sent to a deity that does not respond in any way
scream to the enitity if he would ever come my way
whats the use if I lose you nothing to do but be true
to the fact that I would be lost without a clue





ok u know what I doubt homey will show so when he shows
I will finish this ... I hate putting up a whole piece for no reason
so as soon as I come back and read his I will post the whole thing
 
Old 05-12-06, 09:39 AM   #5
Zais
New to RV
 
IP: F264 E971

ok I win this one
gimme my win and Ill vote
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:01 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.