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Old 07-06-04, 04:44 AM   #1
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Lightbulb "Illusionary chains" - keystyle - by AK

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*Illusionary Chains* - By AK
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2 end a mans life is like 'editing a movie'
cuttin time lines, blankin minds, so many 'emotions move me'
shit fo real.. who am i 2 kill a man over petty beef
tha way of tha street, wake up, fuck, kill n go 2 sleep
then repeat, tha next day, without a single change
learn 2 live with slavery, like we forget about tha chains
i dont mean slavery in a literal way tho
yo, i mean slavery in the way we was taught
without a thought, lives we live is like a blood sport
we jus escaped caged animals, waitin 2 git caught
see modern day slavery is racially un-biased, "black or white"
we slaves 2 tha system, lied 2 like we livin right
while tha 'wasp' society born wit a silver spoon
stays rich by makin us work, stoppin our people bloom
gives us false expectations, like we could end up as a doctor
hate ta shock-ya, but tha education systems made 2 mock-ya
drop-ya standards of life, untill u believe that cha nuthin
teachers tellin you to quit shit when u only 10 or sumthin
thats sum hard shit 2 live with, so we turn 2 tha streets
only thing we know, like life-long dogs goin 2 death-row
institutionalised freedom, tha world thats infront of out eyes
we branded as criminals, sentenced 2 burn in eternal fires
slavery these days, can mean many fuken things
dont hav 2 be 'trapped' 2 be shackled, 'illusionary chains'
see its a common mis-conception, that we should keep our heads up
i been ghetto all my life, no motivation left, im fed up
wit the way we get treated, generations bred 2 be low-life
n cops got a grudge against us, so its hard 2 keep outta strife
and whats mo fucked up, is that theres absolutly no answer
no way 2 stop violence, like chain smokers gittin cancer
we all gon die in the end, theres no hope left 2 defend
see our seeds is only gon repeat our old mistakes like a pop trend
im sick of belief, sick of violence on tha street
sick of havin 2 rhyme about hopelessness 2 a beat
fuck it, nigga, im sick of livin my life 2
might as well end it, edit my movie, tha scripts due.... (BANG)

* * * * * * * * * * * *

yo, dont eva pretend to be nuthin ya not, its un-written rule
dont act a fool, bustin shots fo no reason thinkin its cool
be real 2 yoself, the only way 2 survive, dont be naive
dont let cha credibility take a dive... think before u breathe
learn important lessons before you leave, cuz everything in life
is setup so you can weave, a personality, for me it was crack dealin
learnt everythin unda tha sun, new knowledge im always weildin
n i made it, past early stages, turnin pages, my life is on tha move
constantly stating truth, no flaws 2 proove
but shit, even wit all this knowledge stored in a mans head
he still dont hav tha key so sucess, without, metal n lead
but its aiight, its all we know, fo real, shud jus accept it
death, gangs, hoes n drugs, tha hoods a growin epidemic
its like an accident, wit witnesses, but no1 saw shit
cuz we wus taught 2 deny seen people gittin wigs split
our minds lit, wit a dim light, we cant see where we headed
no big picture, we nuttin but payphones wit no credit
so stay strapped, spike drama, be insane in tha membranes
n stay a slave 2 tha system, 'illusionary chains'
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Old 07-06-04, 11:56 AM   #2
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uppin.. like it? hate it? was sup
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Old 07-06-04, 03:24 PM   #3
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ayo can i git sum feedback in this?
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Old 07-06-04, 11:57 PM   #4
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cmon peep, this tha second day this bin up, theres mo views but no1s givin feedback, if u took tha time 2 read through it then atleast leave a comment.

borin mu fuckas.
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Old 07-07-04, 08:23 AM   #5
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shit, if u hated it then say u hated it instead of readin but no leavin any feedback.

mo views, mo reviews.... na'm sayin?
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Old 07-07-04, 10:47 AM   #6
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i liked it the concept was nice and yo verse flow pretty decent and that piece can really mean something to some cause they can relate to alot of tha shit goin on in the song so i like it it was decent overall be sure to drop some feed on my peice i dont know how to set up a link but its up there in open mic so holla at ya boy
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Old 07-07-04, 11:00 AM   #7
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it was aight for a keystyle kinda simple though but it's all good do u pc
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Old 07-07-04, 11:53 AM   #8
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u mean do i peice? nah dog.

if that aint what chu mean then tell me cuz u talkin 2 a nigga that jus smoked a half a gram of haze. im damn near paralised. lol
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Old 07-07-04, 12:05 PM   #9
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nah man i ment do you pc as in peace
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Old 07-07-04, 12:06 PM   #10
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