lmao @ that guy in a cage...

checkin in, good luck Lyrics...

so i gotta diss the asian dude?? this should be interesting...

they both look asain lmfao

check, gl muhdude

our last gimmick match was country conflict, u'll be bitchin for more
check my smirk, caught as a mastermind.. that got u as a prisoner of war
many flee from ur penatentary-locked for the days, u forgot ur own age
I forgot the outside world, mentally... u become forgotten like a dog in a cage
cant fuck w/ the oahu prison, get cramped behind bars, exceedin from power
plus hes just a dirty fag that wishes he'd get raped.... just to be in the shower!
ull be readin for hours... as rust collects on the handles and ur arms slang older
'slike ur head drinks too much of ur knee, those parts wake up hang'd over
but the pains sober... it seems like you've been discarded for a long while
& my eyes got the glare like a killer, yours got the sympathy of a lost child

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i might be locked in a cage b, but thats cause i got rabies,
your asian, so you got a little dick, thats why you dont got babies,
Bitches be asking for you digits, but it aint to let you hit it dude,
They want your number to call to place an order of chinese food,
You got trapped in jail just for being a jap on the wrong side of the map,
Your ass got clapped in containment by a asian girl who was "strapped",
You were locked up for possibly being a threat to the USA,
but look at your face, the only thing your possibly is gay,
you winning? ha that shit is worse than unlikely,
beat you so bad your ass went kamikaze....


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keyed this up real quick, sorry for dropping so late, forgot about this shit...good luck tho man...peace...

boberic-bad opener, sry, but it didnt even regard to this topic...i felt like the lines were way too long adn you were just tryin to fit as much info in each on as possible, however this completely jacks up the flow....some stuff didnt make sense also (ex:he wishes he'd get raped, in order to go to the shower?)...you did have some good werdplay tho

i.e.-haha...funny shit...a little bit of digresssion but funny nonetheless...good flow...opener wasnt that great...decent closer...nice rhyme schemes...alot of funny punches (they want your number to place and order of chinese food)

i.e. took this battle in just about all the categories...

v/i.e. hypocrisy

cant fuck w/ the oahu prison, get cramped behind bars, exceedin from power
plus hes just a dirty fag that wishes he'd get raped.... just to be in the shower!

vs

WOW.....such a simple verse, i really expected more. no wittiness at all.

v/bob

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LOL, this battle actually made me chuckle at these lines:


cant fuck w/ the oahu prison, get cramped behind bars, exceedin from power
plus hes just a dirty fag that wishes he'd get raped.... just to be in the shower!

vs.

Bitches be asking for you digits, but it aint to let you hit it dude,
They want your number to call to place an order of chinese food,



Both had one quotable in my eyes, but all in all that line from hypocrisy was his only good one from his whole verse, while Bob's was slightly more consistant with a higher level of punches which were decent. That's why he gets my vote.

V/ Bobericc_Lyrics

Bobs verse - Wasnt worded hard enough, some cool concepts, some just all around weak shit, but wording was off here and took away from punches.

Ie - To basic, nothing really flashy and everything seemed pretty noobish as far as concepts, nothing like, oh shit good attempt.

V/ Bob for this.

cant fuck w/ the oahu prison, get cramped behind bars, exceedin from power
plus hes just a dirty fag that wishes he'd get raped.... just to be in the shower!

Bitches be asking for you digits, but it aint to let you hit it dude,
They want your number to call to place an order of chinese food,

That was pretty much the only near quotable line in the battle and i.e. had it. However, even tho he had nearly one more quotable, the rest of his verse was wayyy too inconsistent. It was pretty much all keyed up filler. Bob at least had some punches so I gotta give this to Bob.

Vote - Bob