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Old 08-25-05, 06:06 PM   #1
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Old 08-25-05, 06:49 PM   #2
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garbage you suck at rap go sucide twice
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Old 08-25-05, 07:40 PM   #3
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Drop a link or this will be closed

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Old 08-25-05, 09:34 PM   #4
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You had a good flow & rhyme scheme to it..but it seems better if used for the chorus of a song..wasn't really complex or creative in my opinion as a verse..I give ya credit for tryin to improve..so keep doin what you do
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Old 08-25-05, 11:26 PM   #5
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it was str8 & good 4 a freestyle fa sho but yeah drop dat link b4 diz is closed up
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