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Old 03-11-06, 12:00 AM   #1
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History of a True Essence (freestyle)

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2693859
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224672

"Stereos n qwikk-keys" wit "hott-rocks-on-his-wrist"
Only choice, "burials n flip-wreathz" or "pop-bloccs-off-of-crips"..
One thing he didnt know wasz that his life had already been "chosen-forhim"
He wazz a hood rat, locked up in a society made for "frozen-decorums"
His only "de-plorum",beat tha system or learn to "endure-em"
He wazz n "intelligent-nigga", easily bribed by "benevalant-figures"(bitches/hoes) Cudnt straighten up his life so he decided ta pursue more "incredulant-riggures"
To him liven in rags was too "IRelevant-not-Bitter", he had too much on his mind, like workin his wayy the "felons-n-twitters"..
Somehow, He'd have to learn to "beat-tha-struggle, He had too join his brothers on tha corner, strive to "weed-the-puddle"(impossible)
His oldest cousin always said, 'not fair is a "weak-re-buttle"..
"Crack-was-sold-on-the-corners", along wit "ugly-niggaz"
This kid didnt want that, he was to "black-n-bold-for-the-sojourners", but he wanted to reap the benefits of "lovely-figgures"(paper)..
N then the day came, He wud have to pursue his "rigid-conscience", there wud be no more "unforgiven-nonsense"
Life wazz tough he had to ignore the "intimate-ignorance"..
He was a messiah, who held a "frozen-gun", Cudnt fight the system immediatley, he had to behold an "open-sun", ignore discourgment, he had to spit for the voice non "chosen-one".
Life wazz an absolute reality n he waz "told-to-run"..
So he left the corner n decided to "interpret-misfortunes"
Spitten to homeyz on the school yard, trying to "disemplorate-abortion"
Started makin beats, using "ignorant-distortions"
Life wazz rollin on his one wayy "ticket-to-great, one of the only interpreters of hood, he was disrupting the "bigots-of-fate", Life was on his terms he waz to "rigid-to-break"..
Until one day he found himself on the wrong "side-of-his-block, he glimpsed at the wrong nigga, based on the "light-of-his-frock"(frock=jacket[blue])
he was shot in the head n stripped of everything, from his multi colored tees to the "white-of-his-sock"..
Then he was hit by a God given "rayy-of-light", His mind gave him ideas to help "slay-the-plight"
There wazz one problem tho, he cudnt go back n help out"weigh-the-fright"..
Except for one thing, his "resonance", his written "intelligence", the music that drove him to deprive bangers of "irrelevance"..
You see everyone has their "blue-cressence", but this dude was different,
He wrote skriptures that helped black children goin through troubles "pursue-lessons"
A messiah he was, he sold his absolute reality, he was the "True-Essence"

longest key ive ever done... feed

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Old 03-11-06, 04:56 PM   #2
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it was long but worth the read....this was sum deep ish......the last line was bomb........."a messiah he was"........luvin it.....9/10
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Old 03-18-06, 09:38 PM   #3
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big up on tha feed famz
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Old 03-18-06, 09:59 PM   #4
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bumpin for more...
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Old 03-19-06, 01:00 PM   #5
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Moved to freestyle..pretty cool freestyle...and plus you crip cus?
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Old 03-19-06, 01:30 PM   #6
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naw i aint crip^

thanx fa tha fed yall.. bump
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Old 03-19-06, 09:41 PM   #7
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bumpin for feed yall ...
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