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11-12-05, 08:31 AM
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Diss To WICKED ONE
IP: CF74 5D3A
Diss To Wicked One
WICKED ONE you can’t trick it dun need a ticket son Or you can’t enter the game you not a winner of fame dumb Ass, look fool like a footstool you low classed as a lame bum Name some rappers in your scum chapters you need correction Proceed with affection Hip Hop don’t love you make connection With hot reality and stop the fatality of writing them poor verses More hearses on the way for pick up of your dead phrases and curses // Your slop not critical and plot is political and folks don’t vote for clowns Quotes and nouns seem to floats around like loose ships or boats unbound So from hip hop do a separation your slip knot reputation not high or tall This guy is all mouth, just bitching and afraid man you a kitchen maid Twitching in parades of wackiness while I blow up switching grenades Got a fence renowned making intense sound but your stressed ass can’t trespass Cops will arrest fast in handcuffs your plan get scuffed like unpolished shoes Abolish crews like your team with the type scheme Shakespeare would approve So somehow I adore you Walter so now bow before my altar when your well Get low you can’t wet your flow so you in a draught for words so hell You on route with nerds, bold no fear because I hold dear my skills |
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11-13-05, 12:24 PM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
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11-13-05, 01:04 PM
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Drop another link or this will be closed
*Moved*
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11-13-05, 03:40 PM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
holly fuck Blunt'Ed why you didn't respond to this I got the proper links for the number of response on this piece son
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06-04-06, 02:43 PM
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oh yea?
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IP: 6325 8F54
uhhh, this had alot of filler man
some lines could have hit, but the way you worded them wasnt right, also some just didnt diss dude. lol.. it was like a bunch of set ups, no hate. although like I said you did have some cool concepts. next time just try wording ya shit better and take more time on ya verse and you should be ok.
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