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PROOF | 0 | 0% | |
T West | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-01-04, 12:42 PM | #1 | |
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PROOF [0-0] vs T West [4-3]
IP: 9588 E886
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drop 30 minutes after we both check in blind spits who gives a fuk who votes, as long as its honest and fair checking in.............. |
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02-01-04, 12:42 PM | #2 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
checkin in.............
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02-01-04, 12:46 PM | #3 | |
Banned: Racism
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IP: D4CC BCDF
Proof, you are opening too many battles
can only have 2 at a time, i aint gonna say nuthin but some 1 else might and why in the hell r u battlin t-west kids just dont kno west! |
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02-01-04, 12:59 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 9588 E886
Now everybody listen as I tell you the story of the creation
As I present the PROOF of why rap is experiencing declination Kids are dumb nowadays, pop rap songs are what they dwell This guy is living PROOF......come on.........he likes D12 Now I could rap all day, about taking out herbs like you But then KFC would accuse me of taking their spices too You don't belong on the rap scene, its your location you forget He's from Denver... ...Shouldn't he be at sum restaurant then...serving nuggets This guy aint Go-in nowhere, since we ain't playin karts I dont even need a finisher,,,since I won this from the start |
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02-01-04, 01:04 PM | #5 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
Aiyyo, hows the weather up in the canada ehh?/
ur fuckin childish, u still beleive in santa today/ goin up against me, T West verse PROOF/ its fuckin one sided, like DMX vs Snoop/ halladay is torontos one and only hope/ thats funny though, we had the same coach/ yeah its hard to take but he went to school in arvada/ if you dont believe me, i wont get mad atcha/ but look up his coaches name, i bet its coach capra/ u must be high, to battle me, u didnt think id attack ya/ siitin there in ur seat usin some visine/ cause u cant read the computer, ur tryin to keep ur eyes clean/ |
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02-01-04, 01:07 PM | #6 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
sorry, i didnt know i could only have 2 at a time, but all my other battles are ended
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02-01-04, 01:17 PM | #7 | |
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 92E6 7769
T-west takes dis battle.PROOF ok verse but plz evaluate.t-west one on humour,structureand puches.keep it up both of u.]
V/T-west PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...923#post1146923
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02-01-04, 01:41 PM | #8 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
uppin
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02-01-04, 02:45 PM | #9 | |
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IP: B20F 67F7
uppin for sum more votes on dis shit..................
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02-01-04, 03:01 PM | #10 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
yo ite i give this to t-west beacause,
he had alot better all round verse...his punches were, witty and it worked cus his flow was nice so most bars, hit with consistent punches...nice structure man, proof poor atempt at punches man. your werdings all roung, read some elavated battles, also dnt put those"/" on the end of your punches its newbeish, wor on strucutre and punches man, ...................................pz |
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02-01-04, 03:12 PM | #11 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
ok, more votes though guys, i wanna battle again and i need this battle closed
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02-01-04, 04:50 PM | #12 | |
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IP: F3D1 2BFD
uppin............................................. .
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02-01-04, 04:54 PM | #13 |
swift chancellor
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IP: 399E F0FD
My vote goes to West for consistency and not falling off from beginning to end like Proof did. Nice structure man, kept your punches compact and they hit well. Proof, lose the / after your lines and try to think of more complex disses, you need to use wit rather than sheer force in battles. Telling him he still believes in Santa Clause is not a good punch. For that matter, i wouldn't reccomend telling him that he still believes in the Easter Bunny either. You have to hit where it hurts, his pic, his avy, his existence altogether. Can't waste your time about which fictional holiday characters he believes in. Good luck elevating, vote goes to West.
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02-01-04, 04:57 PM | #14 | |
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IP: E169 A98D
lol, my bad, but at least u tell me what i did wrong unlike, proof, u sucked, never battle again
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02-01-04, 08:23 PM | #15 | ||
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IP: A10D 4933
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PROOF...what u lacked is hard hitting punchlines. Come original with stuff we'd never think of. Like play off my name or sumthing. A weak example... Im battlin t-west, his name admits why I shouldn't try because he is truly is The Wackest Emcee Since Time ^See that...creative shit, bringing wordplay off my name to a whole new level. Good luck with future battles. uppin............................. |
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