10 lines max
1 hour limit

all the other rules apply

We goin barz for barz, but I'm killing this female tard
Cuz bitch, You couldn't match me if I was outfits at K-Mart
You can't escape my radar, I'm impossible to merk
It's like closin internet porn pages fast enough at work
Am I trying my best here? No... I really just morphed
I'm going down to your level like I'm trying to fuck a dwarf
Don't even bother to spit, just quit, We are tired of your sass
You spraying so much shit like you had Shaq's foot up your ass
Next time you try to rap, make sure you breathe for air
cuz you strugglin' like a bitch tryin to swim in a wheel chair

checkin in post my links n verse shortly
will edit this wit links
make sure u get some links dude dont want it gettin closed

this dude must be writing his lyrics wit his "write E" (righty)/
this is a knock out so say nighty nighty//

this dude has lost every battle, so he trys to spit wit me/
i won this battle wit lines one through three//

this dude takes so long with his writtenz/
i would grow gray hairs while hes on the street spittin//

watch out... my punches are hard esp when you drop your guard/
ill beat you so bad you'll wanna leave your yard//

i dont even need lines to close this im guarenteed the win/
i could diss myself and the only way you would get votes is if they sippin on gin//

didnt know i couldnt edit it so here my links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...734#post1015734

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...764#post1015764

uppin for votes

dude dont forget yo links

comeon need some votes..........

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Opener: pimpette
closeR: write e
punches: write
personals: write
metas: write
win: write
Pi,pette dun space ya bars and get rid of the //. You had an OK verse, jus not enough punches and personals. 1
peep this please and drop an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100988

Pimpette... I don't think we can vote yet... not until we got enough posts...


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uppin this.... #2
comeon dont sleep on this vote vote!!!

btw merry christmas to everyone now vote on my damn battle!!!

damn ppl cant we get some votes? uppin # 3

dont sleep on this i wanna get it closed sometime soon even if i do get the loss

flow: write
punches: write
structure :both
wordplay:write
overall: write


vote on this.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

bump....

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